Reviews for Never Say Never
kestrel chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
That was beautiful, I love how you wrote Zexion's voice and how it was brief but still poignant
lily23 chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
"When the last traces of your non-life are fluttering past your eyes, you feel nothing but guilt. You should never have lied to Demyx. You're not coming back. You should never have lied to Demyx.

You love him far too much."

I love that part.
Nagisa Kaworu chan chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
Oh, it was lovely.

Nice written... the second person use gave it a great touch, more emotional. And your Zexion portrayal was amazing.

Thank you very much for sharing.
R2468 chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
Beautiful. That's all I have to say.
jiv3y chapter 1 . 10/24/2007
That was beautiful :]
rascality chapter 1 . 10/23/2007
This is wonderful - very moving and well-written. You convey the emotions really well, and it's simultaneously sweet and depressing. Especially the end - ouch. Great job!
whowhatnow chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
I really loved this.
xroseduelistx chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
*sniffle* That was so sad at the end. I love Zemyx. Poor Zexion.
JapAngela chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
;-; Poor Zexy.

I liked your.. perspective on things. It was an interesting read~
Yami B666 chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
Wonderfully written. Instant fave.

Just a little nitpick - They deserved loosing their own. He deserved loosing his.

"Losing". :) Easy enough to edit out.

Thank you again for a wonderful fanfic.
Ayoru K chapter 1 . 10/15/2007

Why why why?


Zexion isn't dead. He's not dead! D:

*Throws a phoenix down*

He's just disappeared into the ABYSS OF DAHKNESS.

Waiting for that guiding light to bring him back. *coughdemyxcough*

But it was a nice read. NICE READ I SAY!

Ah, so subtle... So sad.

Well done. :)

Update soon!

-Ayoru K.
Cookie Heist chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
My only nit-picky comment is that you wrote "loosing" instead of "losing" in the first/second paragraph.

It was interesting to see your take on Zemyx. The second person perspective was really unique and like, avant garde.

If I were more of a Zemyx enthusiast, I might have more to say.

But yeah. Well-done, as always. _
Mousikos chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
Love it.
ShadowAili chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
Awbish - shawbajii -

I love you times a million.

Oh. Oh my.

Zexion . . . . and, and Demyx, and /Ienzo/ and /Myde/ . . . . oh, oh this is beautiful, my dear. Oh, oh, oh.

With the semblance of coherent thought I have left I'd like to point out that the use of second person was a wonderful device that not many could pull off, and you did it admirably.

Oh. Oh, oh, oh.