Reviews for At the Rose's Thorn
Lord Anubis Judge of the dead chapter 4 . 7/26/2013
Love this story. I've reread it multiple times
KingLoitl chapter 5 . 7/11/2013
Update soon please! this is a very very nice twist to the normal NaruHina storys i have read :D
Guest chapter 5 . 7/22/2012
While there is a point that Hinata would never do something like this, one should not that ITS A FRIGGIN' SMUT FIC. Of course the characters would be a bit (or more than a bit) OOC. I dunno what they're complaining about. I really like this. I've read a few smutfics before to have my dose of steamy NaruHina goodness, like Pile of Lemons and Lemon Chronicles, and I can truly say that you have more ambition and creativity than those fics. For one thing, your story actually has a plausible, in a wierd sense, plot. To compare, yours is like a porno film and theirs (my two examples) are like a porn vid. However, I'm getting off topic.

I just wanted to say that I really like your story and I really can't find anything wrong with your style. It's written well, characters have believable emotions and react as expected of them, and most importantly, it's easy and fun to read.

I really hope you can update this. Don't get discouraged by some people. I don't think there's ever gonna be something that will be perfectly loved. Even Mass Effect, which was pretty much perfection, was bashed for its ending (I did as well but Extended Cut blew me away).
Magic713 chapter 5 . 9/3/2011
I know it has been a while since you updated but I'd like to say I really like this fanfiction. I hope you consider continuing it.
SHINeeSTAR541 chapter 5 . 6/29/2011
the good thing is that there is a LOT of naruhina.

the bad thing is that you don't really talk about the other characters. i'm just saying that the characters that will play a major role in this should have like a little time for themselves which also contributes to the plot
animetears4 chapter 5 . 6/5/2011
Awww that's really makes me sad to hear that you got bad reviews on this story. As for myself, I rather enjoy this story a lot. It is really unique! Hehe X3 even though i don't particularly enjoy how Naruto is somewhat of a player in the beginning, i love love Love the relationship that is developing between him and Hinata! It is absolutely adorable! Hope you update soon! Can't wait for the next chapter 3
codywelch17 chapter 5 . 5/30/2011
please continue this story
flaming-ninjas00 chapter 5 . 2/17/2011
Well i normally don't review but what the heck why not.

Good Point: The writing style is quite good with few spelling or grammar mistakes.

Bad Point: It felt like it got a bit too fluffy at the end there with them falling out of there roles Dom/sub. Hinata actually hit Naruto even if it was playfully it doesn't fit. What i think happened was after Hinata found out that Ace was Naruto you started writing her as she would treat Naruto. This doesn't seem right to me since she fell in love with Ace the feelings just transfered to Naruto and she had gone into her role as sub so quickly that it seems it would have stayed. Now she didn't drop all of it still referring to him as master some and the sex part was still there. For Naruto it's the same problem he seemed to just completely drop his role as Dom. Now it makes more sense for him somewhat as he may not know if Hinata wants to continue that kind of relationship but still.

Anyway just some things I thought I should point out its a good story I hope you update soon
Tally3703 chapter 5 . 1/6/2011
I think ur story is perfectly fine the way it is... really! Ur doin a great job and plz write more
I Read For the Content chapter 5 . 11/8/2010
Well, on the one hand I think the whole plot would be farfetched...

But you've done a great job with it. Please do not let the disapproval of others get you down. Keep writing this amazingly good fic.
Kataangforever2 chapter 5 . 10/27/2010
OH MY GOD! This was sooooooo sweet...such precious fluff...amazingggg
Kataangforever2 chapter 3 . 10/27/2010
That was so cute!Amazing,actually :X . I love this! I hope Naruto's feelings are pure ;)
Kataangforever2 chapter 2 . 10/27/2010
well...that was a ... SUPER HOT SCENE!I LOVE NARUTO!I've always loved him but this side of him...WOW! :D awesome!
RyuuKitKyu chapter 5 . 9/28/2010
Nice, update soon.
Towards the sun chapter 4 . 9/8/2010
Just wanna say that this review and my last review is for chapter 5, NOT for chapter 3 or 4. This site has experienced a short disturbance, i think. Anyway, could you explore more about hinata's feelings? Like the relieve feeling that (thank god) she's practically not cheating to her first love and that her first time is miraculously still with naruto. O yeah, and about the 'power awaken thing', i dont mind if she use it to become a little bit possessive to naruto (perhaps to 'warn' the fangirls that start to notice naruto gorgeousness)
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