Reviews for At the Rose's Thorn
THE HEE-HO KING chapter 4 . 1/26/2008
Well I could use a longer chapter but thorughly enjoyed the gang bang big ups to you and TimeShifter great story and I'm also looking forward to more Cyberfox ja ne
LoliConArtist chapter 4 . 1/26/2008
I can't say much to help you with the story, unforunately. I'm drunk, despite my grammar, and will probably forget this review by tomorrow.

I like smaller stories, though, but not one shots - this one worked well, and I'm sure many other people enjoyed it just as I. I mean, you could easily stop it here, but then... Neji still needs to pleasure Tenten, am I right?

As a side note, I can't wait until Timeshifter is released. Tell your beta (s)he has a great name.
hieiashke chapter 4 . 1/26/2008
well, I like how things are going so far... and I have no complaints. I'm just curious why Neji would be seeking' questions from Naruto... hm...
NinjaDancer chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
Awesome! Please check out some of my stories!
dan01 chapter 3 . 1/19/2008
pleas update this story soon
HolyKnight5 chapter 3 . 1/17/2008
Hmm...GET TO BLOODY WRITE, THIS REQUIRES MOAR!

And make Neji somehow end as...Ino's submissive...that would be a Riot!
Mistress of DarkShadow chapter 3 . 12/24/2007
OMG!

update please i wanna find out what happens to Naruto

does neji beat the sht of him

what does hinata does once she finds out naurto is Ace-sama
Yondaimerocks56695 chapter 3 . 12/20/2007
cool nice story what college u go to (u dont have to tell me just curious)
Nocontact chapter 3 . 12/16/2007
Since chances are her subconcious realizes that Ace and Naruto or at least due to all their similar traits physical and otherwise, are one in the same, wont the hyponotized love thing affect her around him as well; then she will be all confused and that could lead to the whole Naruto being reveiled thing?

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Nocontact chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
Not to many good slave fics on this site, good to see one.

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MONST3R chapter 3 . 12/15/2007
yay you updated!

the hypnotizing thing wasn't really necessary but i liked it anyways.. and the punishment.. whoo.

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lil.ramen.lover chapter 3 . 12/7/2007
...Ace when he wants Hinata to figure out he is Naruto should tell hints like make Hinata call him Hokage besides MAster or Ace-Sama...
copycater chapter 3 . 12/7/2007
OMG...I love you so much now...my fav author my fav story story alert...I love you
Heliosion chapter 3 . 12/5/2007
Please keep the fluff! Im reviewing! I love this fic so freaking filthy how did you get this past the strict ff moderators? I think your a god man. Nobody I know in the writing world has the balls to try this with the kind of stiff asses in charge here
mbshadow chapter 3 . 12/5/2007
this is probably the best smut story i've ever seen on this website. update soon
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