Reviews for Watching Me, Watching You
Fool's Game chapter 4 . 10/21/2007
Okay, they are seriously so cute. At first I was thinking Spencer had no feelings for Ashley, but the part when she calms Ash down makes me think otherwise. Aiden in Chicago a lot? Ashley should come over and keep her company ;)
slickchick84 chapter 4 . 10/21/2007
I really love this story so far, Ashley hitting on Spencer and her just laughing it off is so funny. I like how she's liking her against her will, but then who wouldn't love your know-it-all Spencer? She's darn cute. And smart, I like how things are progressing between them, how Spencer pulls things out of her she doesn't want to talk about.

All in all, this is really one of the better stories floating around here at the moment and I can't wait to read more soon.
Cyberbaby chapter 4 . 10/21/2007
this has to be my favorite chapter out what all four, their interaction just makes me smile so big especially with ashley calling spencer annoying and other things and how she thinks spence tricks her into telling her things or that she has ADD, its all very entertaining...still can't wait to see how the romantic part comes up with spencer being married to aiden and having a kid...pms
Tigger257 chapter 3 . 10/20/2007
Awsome story, your a great writier ans i can't wait to see what happens next. I like how you portray Ashley and Spencer. Thnaks for the post!
slickchick84 chapter 3 . 10/19/2007
Well, this here was a surprise! I really enjoy this story, just read all three chapters and laughed my ass off. Spencer as Ashley's shrink? Bloody priceless I say. The banter between them and Ashley's internal, distracted musings is hugely amusing, you write it so well! Plus there's Madison bashing and that's always a good thing.

Now you've got me wondering why Spencer avoided Ashley in high school, had a little crush on her maybe? Can't wait to find out and read more. Please post more soon.
Fool's Game chapter 3 . 10/18/2007
Free Bird will successfully be in my head all day now too! Thaks alot. ) PMS!
pril chapter 3 . 10/18/2007
i think this is really interesting. i hope it ends well.
Xaris chapter 3 . 10/18/2007
Omg, I'm laughing so hard. I love Ashley. I love how you show without telling us that she is putting up masks for her thoughts and stuff. I just really like your Ashley right now. Not to mention ADD!Spencer. I like it.
TutorGurl chapter 3 . 10/18/2007
I must say, I am loving this so far. Ashley is just too hilarious to me.
Cyberbaby chapter 3 . 10/18/2007
my favorite update so far, spence basically just talks and i think its a refreshing veiw for ashley than having the same questions asked all the time toward her and i find it funny that she says spence has ADD, still can't believe she's marrying aiden and has a kid, don't know how that's going to work out but eh i'll find out the long you post...pms
Xaris chapter 2 . 10/16/2007
I know we are in Ashley's subconscious, but I really think that Spencer is the more interesting character here. So unreadable. I can't wait to see where you take this
Xaris chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
Guru of self-fulfillment, lol, that's funny. I like the set up. Pretty witty
Fool's Game chapter 2 . 10/16/2007
The second chapter didn't disappoint. I really like the plot lines you are drawing. Spencer engaged to Aiden, with baby, and seemingly happy. What a barrier to overcome. Not to mention Spencer doesn't even seem interested, and Ashley is still fooling herself. I love it.
Fool's Game chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
I don't think I've ever seen this set up before. I really like it. Your inner Ashley is funny and sarcastic, like I like my Ashleys, lol. PMS!
Cyberbaby chapter 2 . 10/15/2007
i knew spence would get under her skin, i can already fill the sexual tension start to build, ashley being infuriated is really cute...pms
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