Reviews for stop
HaganeJonetsu chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
A bittersweet story. I liked it tho. ;)

Hei and Yin should be together forever...
Sepsis chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
wonderful! :)
reaper with no name chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
Michael, whoever you are, thank you for inspiring such a good fic from this author.
TheEvilPeaches chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
I love it :)

Very bittersweet ending though...which of course is best!
chibiaries chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
Love the angst and the understated emotions in this.

And squeeing. There was squeeing.
sillimiss chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
loved your story! great job.
katzemadchenchan chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
Oh, that was very good

I really enjoyed reading it

Superb
GenMcvile chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
awesome story and the best pairing ever
greenteamoose chapter 1 . 11/7/2007
Sweet. I really like your descriptions, esp. those on Yin's thoughts. She and Hei really have a close relationship.
Jamaica chapter 1 . 10/22/2007
Wow.

First decent DTB fanfic I've read so far. Then again I've only read about four, so um, wasn't too deep a search...

Anyway, wow, you got them so RIGHT! Especially Yin! This is pretty awesome. Fav!
Nina P chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
Not a bad one-shot. I'm a strong advocate for Yin and Hei, so this fanfic was right up my alley. I loved it.
Wayra chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
Aww. This was sweet. I see a sibling relationship going on, but that's mainly because I just cant' for the love of me see them as a couple. xD

Such a wonderful one-shot. I wonder if you'll do more?

Wayra
Liliumscribe chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
I see friendship/sibling relationship myself but I'm biased. ;) Great as a one off or great as a start to something bigger *hint, hint*

You've written about how Yin sees Hei... what about how Hei sees Yin.

I'd definitely like to see you write more for this fandom
Omnicat too lazy to log in chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
*sigh* That's lovely. :)
Lord Esquire chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
Hm, I liked it. Yin seemed a little talkitive though, but as we don't know what she's like post-series, it's really up to your imagination, but Hei seemed ok.

Good. Thumbs up. Two in fact.