|Reviews for stop|
| HaganeJonetsu chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
A bittersweet story. I liked it tho. ;)
Hei and Yin should be together forever...
| Sepsis chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
| reaper with no name chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
Michael, whoever you are, thank you for inspiring such a good fic from this author.
| TheEvilPeaches chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
I love it :)
Very bittersweet ending though...which of course is best!
| chibiaries chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
Love the angst and the understated emotions in this.
And squeeing. There was squeeing.
| sillimiss chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
loved your story! great job.
| katzemadchenchan chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
Oh, that was very good
I really enjoyed reading it
| GenMcvile chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
awesome story and the best pairing ever
| greenteamoose chapter 1 . 11/7/2007
Sweet. I really like your descriptions, esp. those on Yin's thoughts. She and Hei really have a close relationship.
| Jamaica chapter 1 . 10/22/2007
First decent DTB fanfic I've read so far. Then again I've only read about four, so um, wasn't too deep a search...
Anyway, wow, you got them so RIGHT! Especially Yin! This is pretty awesome. Fav!
| Nina P chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
Not a bad one-shot. I'm a strong advocate for Yin and Hei, so this fanfic was right up my alley. I loved it.
| Wayra chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
Aww. This was sweet. I see a sibling relationship going on, but that's mainly because I just cant' for the love of me see them as a couple. xD
Such a wonderful one-shot. I wonder if you'll do more?
| Liliumscribe chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
I see friendship/sibling relationship myself but I'm biased. ;) Great as a one off or great as a start to something bigger *hint, hint*
You've written about how Yin sees Hei... what about how Hei sees Yin.
I'd definitely like to see you write more for this fandom
| Omnicat too lazy to log in chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
*sigh* That's lovely. :)
| Lord Esquire chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
Hm, I liked it. Yin seemed a little talkitive though, but as we don't know what she's like post-series, it's really up to your imagination, but Hei seemed ok.
Good. Thumbs up. Two in fact.