|Reviews for The return|
| kibaxshino-luver chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
wow that was so hot yo ur a good writer and i hope to read more from u
| biki-chan chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
bravo, i really liked it :D
kinda makes me horny just reading it ... o my .-.
| solitare1 chapter 1 . 2/4/2008
Poor Naruto is gonna need a wheel chair after this. (LOL)
| xEren chapter 1 . 1/29/2008
såg på din sida att du var svensk så bara för att vara allmänt dryg tänker jag review-a lite på svenska. ;) You're skilled, mate! Läste din förra SasuNaru, du är duktig! Keep up the good work!
| My secret Darkness chapter 1 . 12/4/2007
Nice work, and oh, poor naru is being teased by Sasuke. -snickers-
| UneLore chapter 1 . 10/18/2007
It was a great story Liked it!
| stardragon12 chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
This "plot" is way over done but I like how you added that Sasuke likes to take Naruto while he's "half gone" It was a nice touch.
| sarah chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
drool and nosebleed worthy!
| shaedey chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
ahh, i thought it sounded slightly translated. well, it was better than some other stories i read where the author was a non-natively english speaker, writer, whatever. It was pretty good, i enjoyed it!
| Yumi Asuka chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
that's was a great sexing Sasuke gave to Naruto!
i loved the vocabulary used,
"when I fuck you while you're half gone"
that was wonderful. the "half gone" part just described Naruto during the sex so well.
ah i love SasuNaru so much, it was an amazing oneshot!
| Alrye chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
Sasuke's a sick little boy, but we love him for it.
| Black-Rose23 chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
Other than the verb agreement in some places and all being spelled al, this was really good. I like it! Heh, I suppose it never really matters what the uke dislikes if it pleases the seme.