I'm sorry man, but I can't get into a story where Gohan becomes the equivalent of a god that doesn't even need to sleep ... all before the age of 5? A bit ridiculous to me.

I stopped reading cause I got bored. No buu? I thought it would show how much he had changed and he would be able to defeat majin buu and not be a let down like in the real thing but there is no buu so I can't be bothered reading anymore, just not my kind of fic anymore. Good though, I'm just very picky.

Ummm... Ok? What was that!? I mean, that was quick, they have never met before, when he shoved her against the wall Iitterally thought he was going to, you know, it scared me.

How did nobody know about this?!

"NOW! RUN!" Gohan shouted.
“Fly, You Fools!”-Gandalf the Grey, lord of the rings, fellowship of the ring
Err, literally.

shit fic

Also So far in the Story im feeling like that Bag of Infinite Senzu Wish was a huge waste of time. WHY didn't the Saiyans take one when they were hurt? Didnt Gohan wish for 10 bags? Whats the point if they don't take a Senzu during the battle. I thought that's where you were going since with Gohan there would be 4 vs 4 but apparently not

I'm just getting into this and im enjoying it but I have sime questions. Why did Goju die here from just being stepped on in the beginning when he died from a Special Beam in canon? feel like he shouldve survived tht unless plot convenience.
When Goku showed up to fight the Saiyans he had Senzu on him, yet in this one he didnt and still had to wait. Even if you say he didnt go get them, that should mean Korin had them still on him and he should've been ready to go. Then theres the part where Goku and and the gang fight Frieza but Dende doesnt heal ANYONE which seems odd. Still love how the story is going, im just confused on those points

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Kakabrat, really?

How is Goliath even a reference in DBZ? Let alone one that Vegeta would know of?

Why you made Goku weaker? With how much stronger he should be I expected super saiyan 3.

How did Kaioken get so weak that 50 times barely doubles Goku powerlevel?