Your shit and illogical

Awesome story hope you get back to updating. Seeing where we are now with Dragon Ball Super, you cold do so much with this story.

I don't know if you know this but in ch 2 or 3 you already said that govan doesn't sleep. He just meditates but than in ch 4 you said because of his unification with echo he doesn't need to sleep only meditate. Another was that piccolo destroyed the moon how can govan be able to control his transformation on the full MOON because of his transformation when there isn't a moon to see. I like the story but maybe you should really reread everything you have written. Another thing i was sceptical where gonna remembered goku's training and even made his own martial art. I even accepted him being able to meditate and not sleep. I even let him being psychic be. But him being able to figure out MAGIC to make new weighted clothes is a bit too much. Cause if you don't know Piccolo makes clothes by using Magic not Ki.
I thought the story had potential but as it stands i can ignore weird shit like that for so much before I will give up. I will ignore everything till now and read another chapter or two hoping nothing else wonky is in your story.

Ok the singing was a bit too much.

Gohan has way too much knowledge and maturity fot child his age in this... but meh whatever I'm bored enough to continue reading

Awesome story beginning to end! The young Gohan fusing with Echo, meeting Scythe and eventually bringing back Mirai Gohan was extremely cool. Once again, the story was great and thanks for the awesome read.

Ooook. So, I'm still not sure what to think of your story, as it is quite different from what I would have expected, but... Seeing as Broly and, before him, Cooler, had very big kis, why didn't the other Z-fighters come to aid Gohan? They should have known that there was a disturbance, because, when a power level is high enough, they sense it without even trying, and I'm assuming Broly's is all consuming, being the legendary super saiyan that he is.

Wow badass

Please don't use Japanese words in the story, you seem stupid when you do it and ruin the whole mood of the story.

Where do you live? I am just wondering because, in most of America High schools don't have recess.

This chapter name is also a song

Please update your story because I wanna see what happens during the Majin Buu saga and up to GT and the Battle of Gods Saga

Its been 5 years when r u gonna update

Kaioken doubles the power so does this mean that the human Z Fighters can catch up?

Gohan died that is stupid