Reviews for Disclosure
Rose-Aki chapter 1 . 6/11/2014
It was so typical Zuko and Mai. I liked it :)
Always-Striving chapter 1 . 5/22/2014
This story is amazing, I love how paradoxical and almost satirical the overly-formal writing style is, and how the dialogue is such a refreshing and casual break from that. I loved it.
RakshaDaemon chapter 1 . 5/13/2014
Silly Zuko, don't you know that "Fine" is just in between "i'm angry" and "I'm depressed"? When someone says they're fine, they are NEVER fine. If they were fine, they'd say they were "good" or "okay"... Fine... Fine is bad...
Lol, for a moment there I thought Iroh was going to explain the birds and the bees... Lovely fic mate, i sure do enjoy your writing!
Waywardneko chapter 1 . 1/4/2014
Snerk...
This is cute. :3
Poor Zuko...
wendladarlings chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
Six years later, I still love and remember this story.
CutieSOS chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
so funny
Frosted Landscapes chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
wow, i finally found you! yours was one of the first pieces of fanfiction that i read. thank you for introducing this beautiful world where fans and fiction come together. It is truly appreciated :) though i'm not longer a maikonite (i've become whole-heartedly zutarian) this is still a beautiful read and thank you once again for your stories which brought me into this very special world.
meowll chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
It's amazing that you managed to make both of them so in-character, the whole story seemed scarily plausible. In the best way possible. And your brilliant writing style kind of helped too, a lot. God, this was awesome.
Keyanna chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
I think my favorite part of this might be Uncle Iroh's flower analogy when he's talking to Zuko. Very funny!
StarryNight359 chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
zuko is so awkward
CrazyAce'n'PokerFace chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
oh, this was amazing! they're so perfectly in-character, and i can see this kind of situation playing out just like this. and Iroh! HAHAHA. :)
Kimberly T chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
Ohh, Zuko... so very adorkable! :-)
Penny ToughGirl chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
Hahaha! Zuko was having women troubles! How cute! And Uncle Iroh sure knows how to get under Zuko's skin!
woo chapter 1 . 3/21/2011
Lol this was so so soooooo good! Amazing! Thanks for sharing. Maiko ftw! :D
Rosawyn chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
Mai acts as if it's all his fault, but she turns away from him on the 3rd night and was either asleep or pretending to be on the 2nd. Her character seems a bit off in this; in the show we see her taking the innitative with hugs, kisses, etc and yet here, nope. What was Zuko to think? They're finally married, and now she's lost interest?
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