Reviews for Three of Pentacles
EreAsha chapter 9 . 12/23/2010
Great idea. Since the baby is all intellegent and stuff, I think he should start trying to appeal to raito, or at least notice that himself making L happy is making raito, who I will now refer to as light, unhappy. Liight is his father even if he does ignore him. So little tski, wow I just know I misspelled that, devides a little plan. And all this is propally much to complicated for an intellent baby. Who cares? He already knows two langueses as well as sign language. You. Know, just an idea for if/when you continue.
Tsukaro24 chapter 9 . 4/19/2009
This story is awesome! My favorite parts are the parts where L takes care of Tsuki. Both of them are so damn funny. Great Job! :)
ObsessionsGoTooFar chapter 9 . 3/19/2009
Hmm...I congratulate you for sparking my interest in a pairing! Anyway...

I love you a lot at the moment for writing this X3 But really, it's extremely well-written. Plus, you kept L completely in character [Raito as well] :) The plotline is unique and I've enjoyed it immensely :D

It seems to have ended, has it? I am content either way
perfidiouspink chapter 3 . 12/27/2008
"Ba". That made me lol terribly. I am enjoying this story so far! The humourous narrative style and the very interesting (yet disturbing) Raito-father concept keeps me reading :)
TenshiXXX chapter 9 . 12/25/2008
Oh, Light you idiot! If you didn't want kids, you should have kept it in your pants!

Or at least listened to the saying "Don't be silly, wrap your willy" XD

Seriously, though, it's pretty clear that Light planned this, and I'm interested to find out the reason he wanted this to happen, and why Misa killed herself.
WritingsInTheCloset chapter 9 . 11/16/2008
wow! you did a really great job on this one! i especially loved how you portrayed L.. he's just like a teenager falling in love for the first time.. i find it really cute that he's struggling to understand feelings that he has never felt before.. can't wait for the next chapter!;p
enchanted nightingale chapter 9 . 9/23/2008
Light is being a bastard...

But the story is rather interesting.
Shiragikun chapter 9 . 8/18/2008
I want this updated. xD Aww, poor Raito-and L of course. His first friend and a 95%...:( L must be horrifically depressed.

Tsuki is a genius baby. How old is he again?

Anyways, I wanted to say the part about Watari was sorta insulting...Poor Watari, who've stayed with L for so long.

ARgh, you last updated in October of 2007..._ seriously, update soon? :D I has cookies!
Self-san chapter 9 . 7/29/2008
:D I like how the story is progressing so far. L and Tuski are so cute and what not. :) I really can't wait to read more! Keep up the great writing!
nan chapter 9 . 7/18/2008
Oh God please! Could you please continue this! I love it and it's absolutely brilliant, I think you did a great job keeping Light a little withdrawn and stuff, he seems more like himself that way.

I think this fic has increased my love for L which I didn't know was even possible, and suddenly Tsuki has become my favorite character xD Could you please update this again, it's a wonderful story! ... Please?
Kawaaii Reader PR.Rot chapter 9 . 7/7/2008
lol Tsuki is cute

but L is cuuter

and light is cute too



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' ' - this is bunny light .

please update soon

-x-x-x- (Prince Raiden Ruler of thunder)
liz chapter 9 . 6/29/2008
YAY!I'v been waiting for a scene where light gets baby food on L is finally starting to realise some of his feelings for light.I will definaly look for your kinky sex fanfiction between L and light.L seme(on top) please!Have a cookie and a hug *hugs you then runs away with your wallet* :)
alx-nichole chapter 9 . 6/24/2008
This is very interesting.

I get these mental images of Misa trying to be a mom while Raito is interacting with Tsuki. :)
L Kagamine chapter 9 . 6/15/2008
Great fic, love it lots. I shrieked when I saw I had read through all the chapters. lol Please update soon! I can't wait until Raito and L do more than just hug. :3 That was a sweet moment, though, even if it didn't end in a make-out session. XD You're a great writer, please continue. :]
Star Jinin chapter 9 . 6/8/2008
It has been brought to my attention that there is simply too much filler in this story. Don't take this wrongly, I know that you enjoy these fatherly-son scenes and they do somewhat enhance the story, but it is also slowing down the plot and the story moves too slowly.
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