Reviews for A Better Deal, Revisited
Rosetta Brunestud chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
That's really good! ) I could imagine this scene happening in the show... I don't think Sam took Dean's death sentence as good as they showed in the show, I think there were more to it and your fanfic showed it in a very interesting way

I liked it )

See you around

Rosetta
Hermione's Shadow chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
wow, that was really well written!
carolinesayer chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
aw! that is true though, he did get a better deal than john but still dean! i did feel mega guilty myself at end of s2 i mean i wanted dean to have never made the deal but i was SO glad he had... not good :( never mind it all kinda worked out :D thankyou xx
KaoruKamiya307 chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
Aw...good job! I like the ending when he mentions that he got a better deal than his dad. Heartbreaking!
yaoigirl20 chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
aww. why'd you stop? it was really good! I think you could've continued it a little farther... o well, not up to me right lol.
Cindy Ryan chapter 1 . 11/14/2007
Well written. Captured Dean beautifally.
Letting The Rain In chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
Oh, I love this! It hits just the right note, and the end line was fab - leave the audience wanting more. Perfect.

Do you think Kripke would let us have a bash at writing the show?
Half-Winchester chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
Great story. Don't you just hate that Dean made the deal? But the thing that really sucks out loud is that being mad at Dean is like being mad that Sammy's alive. It makes me want to cry! Cuz, you can't choose which one you want to live more. You love Dean, but would you want Sam dead so Dean could live? Or vice versa? It's ripping me apart. I want to kill that Jake kid, ressurect him, kill him again and make sure his trip to Hell is one he'll never forget!

Yeah, sorry about the babbling. Love the story. I hope I'll write some half as good as yours...
raputathebuta chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
Great oneshot! I've often wondered about the immediate aftermath of Sam finding out about Dean's deal. Lots of good emotion here. Oh how I love the boys when they're in emotional pain! Does that make me a bad person?
heather03nmg chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
I loved it! You broke my heart and made me cry but I still loved it! Simply beautiful.