|Reviews for Rebuilding|
| ACT II chapter 55 . 9/28/2011
Seemed they were taking Tingle too seriously...
You know what, I had fun reading this chapter.
Not just fun... GOLDEN fun, geddit?
'Cause I don't...
How dare you show that image attachment now I'm scarred for life :C...
| ACT II chapter 54 . 2/12/2011
WHAT A TWIST!1
Seriously, it really took that long for someone to officially point out that Pit was gay?
Wait... did ROB just... die? HE WAS THE ONLY THING I LOVED, EVER EVEN THOUGH HE IS A ROBOT... WHO IS ONLY IN A VIDEO GAME...
What! 2012 is the arrival time of the next chapter? Then it better be long and rap up the whole story since, well... you know... 2012...
| ACT II chapter 53 . 5/23/2010
Cool You have new ideas!
Ah! What are Dialga and Palkia doing?
Too bad no one's listening to Mario with going the quick and easy route.
Pit was... yeah...
Yay the assist trophies are grouping up!
*Orders*: Make more chapters!
*Also orders*: People reveiw more!
| CharmyNutty chapter 1 . 5/15/2010
Bad news. I'm creating a new story called Mystery Nintendo Theater 3000 (Parody of Mystery Science Theater 3000) and one of your stories has been chosen to be made fun of. Sorry.
| ACT II chapter 52 . 3/20/2010
Yay I've at least semi-come back to this place if not more. So now we're back to the main story... Awesome? I don't know my reviewing skills have deteriorated after such a long hiatus. But yeah this story's awesome.
| Rulin chapter 52 . 2/28/2010
-Rises from pile of crumpled paper, tax returns and coffee cups-
Urgh... What'd I miss?
Anyhoo, good to see you've gotten over the 'wai so srs' part of the story in this chapter. (Aha... Considering I've been lazy to review the last dozen chappies or so, I don't really remember what I've read)
But then, unless I imprint the chapters onto the back of my eyelids, I don't know if I'll have time to re-read everything. Ah well...
| GrimGregg chapter 52 . 2/28/2010
...OH. MY. GAWD. *hastily reads chapter* ahh, I feel refreshed now.
Angry Luigi! *bounces around* heh heh, I love him getting all angry on his bro. And smart DK, retarded Fox, sexually confused Pit...Ah, good times, good times...
So, any chance of an update slightly quicker this time? *nudge nudge hint hint* Well anyway, still a pleasure to read, with enough action and humor to make my brain explode all over again :D
| Razzkat's GOAST chapter 51 . 1/17/2010
Oh, oh - I am teh goast of Razzkat! I have come to R and R Rebuilding, just like the old times!
It was a very excellent chapter, just like the old times! I especially enjoyed people suggesting they were going to beat up Pit!
I also enjoyed Wario suggesting jihad on the other Smashers!
I enjoyed Zelda being crazy as always.
Yoshi sucks! He's green. :(
Sonic, don't blame others for your own failings. On the other hand, I forgot Silver existed until I read it right here.
CAPTAIN FALCON! He's our hero. He's gonna take the bad guys...down to zero?...
I am in love with King Dedede. I did not say that out loud.
Why you not update since September? :( You were waiting to here from Razzkat's ghoast, weren't you? Well, now Razzkat's ghoast has reviewed you, so you can update again. Hooray! Everyone is glad as IStalkKirby updates Rebuilding. Yep. Everyone.
*pressure pressure pressure*
| GrimGregg chapter 51 . 11/29/2009
Well, just found this story, and have had many conflicting thoughts reading it.
The first few chapters I was thinking that this seems like quite a funny tale, and read on.
By Chapter 20 I was thinking that I had stumbled upon pure. comic. GOLD. And read on.
During Wolf arc the action/slight humour was making me come extremely close to dying from excitement.
Now my brain has just exploded from all this humour and action, but my now mindless body is staring listlessly at the computer screen, hoping madly for some sort of update, within this year preferably. In other words, your story FRICKIN ROCKS!
| Undeletable chapter 51 . 9/16/2009
Great to see all of 'em together again. (Well, almost all of them.)
Particularly liked the banter with DK.
Oh, and I did suspect that woman was Samus earlier. Hooray for me!
Keep up the good work. Even if summer interrupts.
| Undeletable chapter 50 . 8/7/2009
You killed the last plan. :O
Oh...wait...not that type of execution. My bad.
Wow. 50 chapters. Time flies, eh?
So Wolf's dead. Does he, perchance, become Zombie Wolf?
Ganondorf and Lucario must high five at some point.
"falling to her kne...falling" begs the question...how do the puffballs all manage with no arms and legs? And disproportionatly long feet?
I hear alive people.
Top stuff, well done on the half-century (speaking of which, time to go back and watch the cricket).
Oh, and I hope your results were good. :)
| Sir NZ chapter 50 . 8/4/2009
Oh my god! They killed Wolf! You ba*!
Too good, I can't believe it. It seems like you take the normal substance emmissary story and just make it a million times better.
Nice cliffy too.
| Ripper22 chapter 49 . 8/1/2009
I hate to admit it, but I skimmed through most of this chapter 'cuz I didn't feel like reading anymore. Good job on what I did read though.
| Obsessive shadower chapter 44 . 7/29/2009
Yes, it is I, and I am back from a rather lengthy hiatus, as mentally unstable as ever (if not more)! Again, I have nothing but wonderful things to say about the story. The transition from humor to action was kinda abrupt, but it occurred seamlessly! I enjoyed this chapter just as much as the other ones.
Two things though!
1. Do primids bleed? I thought they just simply disappeared after being brutally murdered (and possibly torn to shreds) by a weapon of the character's choice... their lifeless bodies never even get a chance to hit the ground! I feel cheated. D:
, thinking? WTF? *Prods Jigglypuff with a stick* See! No response! err... What's that sound? It sounds like...Uh oh... *shoves the deflated Jigglypuff corpse under the bed*
3. You'll receive a new Jigglypuff in the mail in about a month.
Now onto the next chapter!
| Undeletable chapter 49 . 7/19/2009
I'm expecting it this week in the mail.
Apologies to Razzkat...*sniggers*
Anyhoo, the chapter.
...It was good. It was not bad, for bad is the opposite of good, and because it was good, it could not be the opposite of good, which is bad. Not bad that it could not be the opposite of good, which it is. You see?
I don't like Wolf. He's too snappy. Like a crocodile. Except he's a wolf.
MGaW, I like his thinking. Smart guy, were he not senile.
Ganondorf...well, I wouldn't trust him to go, personally. He'll probably go somewhere by himself.
As I said, good stuff. Not bad. Because...