|Reviews for Like Toy Soldiers|
| scberg chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
Wow, that was good, I like it.
| KrisEleven chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
I loved it! This was really well done. Beautiful language.
"...forever did not belong to him nor did it belong to her"- I loved this line.
Really well done. The one thing I noticed out of place was you used 'bare' instead of 'bear' at the beginning of Aang's paragraph, and other that that the structure/grammer/spelling was perfect.
| i-embrace-OCD chapter 1 . 11/1/2007
This was an awesome oneshot. I love the song "Like Toy Soldiers;" it's really sad, but still good. Once again, the oneshot was awesome - short and sweet, filled with meaning, and I just want to tell you that I love how you get a message across. I also loved those last four lines - a fitting ending. Amazing.
| Fire Lord Azula chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
A wondrous, thoughtful look into the minds of the characters before ( what they hope will be ) the final battle. When it comes to inner monologues and soul-searching, you can't be bested.
They all remember who they're fighting for: loved ones, those without a voice, and the less-fortunate who are denied basic human dignity. Their selflessness is reflected in your writing. It's lyrical, the way you piece their thoughts together and broaden their dimensions.
| Alysia Of The Pen chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
Nice and refreshingly serious take on the war. TOY SOLDIERS WILL KICK YOUR SS OZAI! Believe.
| lirendil chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
Wow, I love how you pulled that song perfectly to match their situation... cause it's true; in the grand scheme of things, that's all they may seem to be: toy soldiers in the midst of war. It's all to easy to be struck down. The calm before the storm is always the worst.