Reviews for The Frank Hunter
IansInsane chapter 1 . 6/6/2015
Actually Gendo did abandon him at four.
Toby860 chapter 7 . 2/12/2014
good so far
Toby860 chapter 7 . 12/2/2011
okay I like the story and for pairing I suggest shinji and sniper wolf. also while he is there he should also get better at being a sniper just so he can get closer to wolf. I really like the storage and I wish you would pick it up after abandoning it for so long
creativesm75 chapter 7 . 5/10/2011
nice
Cirex chapter 5 . 7/28/2009
A military ship – an Aircraft Carrier, parked in the Tokyo-3 harbour? Why was it here?

As he started walking towards it, Shinji saw that the markings were definitely US Army.

He chuckled to himself. What were the chances that an Aircraft Carrier, an American one, would dock here?

Actualy there is a large chance. After WWII, Japan was limited to having a small defense force, so the US military actualy makes up the majority of the defense of Japan
Selene Jaeger chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
This is definately different, i'll give you that but nonetheless interesting. Shinji as gray fox...hmm. Im actually working on a metal gear/evangelion crossing fic as well but im not sure when i'll get the inspiration to finish it.

it could probably stand some order revison but over all a good attempt.

hahaha the first thing that ran through me though was anger cuz i wanted to do this pairing before i found someone else who did.
Cirex chapter 7 . 11/23/2008
Two questions, 1: Where's Raven, and 2: Where's Liquid?
Reyes Yong Nydia chapter 7 . 1/2/2008
pretty good.
Capito Celcior chapter 7 . 12/28/2007
Don't worry, I love stories where groups of villains turn good, or at least, generally good but still occasionalkly sadistic. Or just are good from their own point of view. Just check Manga and Anime. I find that lots of Evil Organisations have better (read: more awesome) characters.

Example 1: Ever watched Trigun the Anime? Legato Bluesummer, Dominique the Cyclops, Dai-Rei the Blade, Midvalley the Hornfreak, Cain the Longshot, Zazie the Beast, Cray the Ninelives, Hopper the Gauntlet, E.G. Mine... The Puppeteer, the Gunbarrel... all of these are rather cool. In one oganisation? Awesome.

Example 2: Rurouni Kenshin. I mean, come on. Shishio Makoto gathered wuite some cool "Ten Blades". The Swords Collector, the Giant, the Ogre Iwanbo (admitted, later it turned out to be a puppeteering guym which is even cooler), , Henya the Flighted, Anji the Angry Priest, a blind short-spear adn turtle-shield fighter, young Soujiro, Kamatari the Scythe a gay feminine boy...all that under the leadership of Shishio Makoto, a swordsman who alsu used fire and explosives...come on, they were cool. And before that, Aoishi's bunch had Hanya who burned of his own face so he could wear masks and fought awesomely, then that muscle guy and Hitoko who spewed fire, and a darts user...

Example 3: Naruto. Although the latest chapters since PTS sucked rather badly, Akatsuki is still awesome. Come on, you have a Shark Guy wielding a hughe Chakra eating blade. You have a puppeteer who replaced his own body with that of a puppet and wield hundreds of puppets that once were human. You have a Half Plant half Human with split personality that can burrow out of nowhere, uses plants and likes to eat people. You have an explosive clay wielder who has mouths in his hands that spew out animals made of clay. You have an immortal scythe wielder that can be chopped to bits yet still remains alive and a guy who stitches himself back together.

How are organisations of such unique and skilled individuals NOT awesome. So this FOXHOUND group is automatically a good haven for Shinji/Null/Frank to stay, make friends with said individuals, and create bonds of trust that can destroy all outer influences. So keep him there, make him happy, and keep him awesome (BTW, with his memory back, does that include all his missions? Cause it might mold hinm slightl, but certainly improve his experience. He would know what of his training works and what doesn't, as well asreact slightly difrent after witnessing his primary techniques fail and thus utilise his back-up plans from the start...)
unannehmlichkeiten chapter 2 . 12/6/2007
This chapter was pretty good, I liked it except for a little grammar, but it didn't inhibit the feeling gained. OOne thing though: is this set in Japan, because if so what is the CIA doing there?
TimeReaper chapter 7 . 11/27/2007
Update soon! D
Whip Inflation Now chapter 1 . 11/26/2007
"Leaving all he left behind..."

That's very Zen, but it doesn't make much sense. The title doesn't make any sense either.
creativesm75 chapter 6 . 11/4/2007
neat
conlan0414863 chapter 6 . 10/31/2007
keep on typing
Havock chapter 6 . 10/25/2007
needs another chapter
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