Reviews for Innocence
MaiWishes chapter 1 . 1/9/2014
Wow that was really good
Anonymous chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
Very well written! I normally don't like OCs, but yours was very well done.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
Mewtwo sure is growing up quickly. A couple years old and he's already acting like an angst-ridden teenager! P

...Yeah, sorry. Didn't enjoy this one. The stuff that was supposed to be deep and introspective just came off as emo.
the-ice-cold-alchemist chapter 1 . 6/22/2012
awwwww

thanks for this story

it was awsome
Guest chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
Very nicely done. You capture mewtwo's conflict with society exquisitely!
Dragonsrule18 chapter 1 . 11/5/2010
Amazing story! One of the best I've ever read! You deserve a award!
Bob Schwartz chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
Very well-written.
Meriah chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
I liked this! It was a good length - long enough to develop empathy for the characters, but also short enough to keep it it from getting stale.

I never thought about how Mewtwo acquired the cloak. Your idea makes the most sense. I cannot see Mewtwo buying something, both because he doesn't have money and because he would likely associate money as being a cruel apparatus for human society. Likewise, I doubt he'd steal something because he is ethical. So... for you to have proposed that it was given to him as a gift (even though he considers it an exchange; he's so stubborn!) is a cute and effective idea.

Something else I appreciated was Analise's inner beauty. From how you described her appearance, she was quite plain... but that was made up tenfold by her remarkable soul. This was a smart thing to do because otherwise she wouldn't have seemed as pure.

Finally, it was compassionate of Mewtwo to have helped her. He showed that he is essentially more human than Analise's attackers, the other sinners, and most of mankind.

Great work!
Deluxe489 chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
An interesting piece, to say the least. It probably would have had more effect if she had died, but your way works too. I like how you didn't make the girl appear all attractive or beautiful, and how the others admire her for her compassion instead. I guess I never really wondered where Mewtwo got that cloak, figuring that they just wanted to make him look even more dark and foreboding and full of cynicism than he already was, or that he just stole it off someone.
Scarlet Pikachu chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
Mewtwo does feel emotions... Wow I thought he was kinda empty. I'm glad to know he doesn't just stand by and watch a innocent child's dying soul without trying.
PPE chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
This is by far the best Mewtwo fanfic out there. I think you portrayed him well. I always wondered where he got that cloak from. I like how you tied everything together. Excellent job.
Tomoyo Kinomoto chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
So that's how he got the cape! *laughs in admiration* You're really good at oneshots, you know that? Especially the characters. It's hard to make good characters who don't overwhelm the story, but you did it!
Red One1223 chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
I like it! Please make more like theses!
WiseAbsol chapter 1 . 11/4/2007
Hey Aeris...here's finally leaving you a review.

What can I say? I loved this. It was beautiful, and Mewtwo wasn't so much as an arse...and it answered the unspoken question about the cloak.

It is nice to see I inspired someone. That is always nice...

Kudos on this piece. I apologize for not being able to go into more description, pointing out my favorite bits and so forth...but suffice to say I really enjoyed it.

I needed something to enjoy. I need it now.

Thank you for this.

Let me move on to 'Rain' now.

~ WiseAbsol
PG Palmer chapter 1 . 10/25/2007
This story was beautiful. Even though Mewtwo was bitter over his own past, he still allowed himself to show compassion for the few humans that were kind.

It was one step in the path to redeeming yourself, Mewtwo. There's hope for you yet.

Aeris, you seemed to indicate in the introductory notes that you don't really like writing oneshots. Your oneshots are wonderful! They focus on a single character in a single situation, and bring out the qualities of that person.

Excellent story, Aeris. As always.
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