|Reviews for Love life, lifes lost|
| SinfulDesire08 chapter 24 . 11/14/2009
i really do love this story
| jevans47403 chapter 23 . 6/23/2008
ahh come on keep it coming! please! You've done a great job!
| jevans47403 chapter 9 . 6/23/2008
Yes it cracked me up couldn't stop laughing! Great
| jevans47403 chapter 6 . 6/23/2008
I'm lmao and i can't stop, this is hystrical! keep 'em coming!
| summer1260 chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
please continue this is the best story ever i love it great plot and suspence
| shortshrimp chapter 23 . 4/26/2008
hey awsome chpt its really really good...cant wait 4 more...
sabrina aka sabs
| crzygrl chapter 23 . 4/23/2008
O-M-G! JEEZE KAYLA! U SHOULD SOO UPDATE LIKE REALLY SOON (or as soon as possible i should say hehe lol...) ne ways AWSOME chapter! cant wait 4 more talk 2 u later...
| csibutterfly530 chapter 22 . 4/19/2008
you better continue this or else, good story :)
| stareagle chapter 22 . 2/26/2008
I commend you on the energy and enthusiasm you put in your stories. I confess I haven't finished reading all the way through this yet, I copied it to a word doc so I could read it off line. I am on dialup so I budget my online time.
I offer the following comment in the spirit of one writer to another trying to improve their craft. Please do not be offended. I don't know if you have access to a word processing program like MSWord, but it would be very helpful to you if you could get a spell check. The most consistent and unfortunately common mistake you make is with the pronoun, I.
Second most common mistake occurs with contractions. I'll stands for I will. Won't means will not. He's means he is, not hes. Who's means who is, not whos. Ma'm is the contraction for madam, as in yes ma'm, not mam.
I realize this is not school, but if your readers are going to spend the time to read 50 plus pages of your story, please consider upgrading at least those grammatical errors. It is an issue of courtesy, clarification and readability. I have followed your writing since the earliest stories and have seen growth and complexity in your work. This area of grammar is just the next step in development.
Thank you for considering these comments. I appreciate your sharing of imagination and humor.
| Sara and gabriella chapter 22 . 2/25/2008
aww cody hun i loved the chp & so does brett...awsome job shorty...luv's
sarbear & bj aka brett )
| Dancer Traveler Dreamer chapter 21 . 11/15/2007
Wonderful chapter,can't wait for the next one!
| Micky's Girl chapter 21 . 11/14/2007
Yikes! How is Emilia gonna survive being 12weeks premature! This is not good news. Damn Katie's father and that other guy Adam. I am wishing all that is evil on Adam and Robin. I am also wishing good things for Katie and her unborn baby!
keep up the good work, this is exciting.
| WhiteTulip6BLou chapter 21 . 11/14/2007
la la la, lol sorry this was great, i love the suspense and i love this story, :D
| Sara and gabriella chapter 20 . 11/13/2007
hey...i bet i get a free cookie rite? hehe...lol...ne way awsome chp yet again...well cant wait 4 more...
| toothchick chapter 19 . 11/11/2007
This chapter was cute!