Reviews for Loyalty
spiritstallion chapter 1 . 10/19/2007
love this
ArodieltheElfofRohan chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
That was so good Cal! Keep up the awesome writing, mellon nin! :D

~Arodiel
MerrytheHobbit chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
Very, very nice poem! I love it!
cookiefleck chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
Very nice, and I agree loyalty is what ensured their success. I think perhaps you meant "imminent"?
StarLight9 chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
This is great, Cal :)
LexraHeart chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
how many lines is it? Nice poem though.
Nieriel Raina chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
This was beautiful, Cal! Love it!

NiRi
RofS chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
Ooh, good! ...No offense, but I think you write poetry better than stories. *grin*