Reviews for Deception
Udunnome chapter 4 . 6/25/2011
What about the disclaimer?
loving-reader-and-writer chapter 13 . 9/6/2008
didnt like the ending to its not like i could do better. but i like the story. good work.
Inner Self chapter 6 . 8/8/2008
i hope harry and ron check her pulse.
oh hell naw chapter 2 . 12/26/2007
o i love it, i love how draco actually used the crucio spell without hesitation, it really adds to the dramatic effect! you scored huge points in my book for being a bold writer
Yemi Hikari chapter 13 . 12/4/2007
Nice ...
Yemi Hikari chapter 12 . 12/4/2007
But we saw in the fic that Ron was dead!
Yemi Hikari chapter 10 . 12/4/2007
Oh ... cruel!
Yemi Hikari chapter 9 . 12/4/2007
Oww! Draco did that! Cunning!
Yemi Hikari chapter 8 . 12/4/2007
Ussually I see Zabini not like this. Good character building.
Yemi Hikari chapter 7 . 12/4/2007
So ... how did they get out? I thought Malfoy was hurt? This is quite odd, but interesting where it is going.
Yemi Hikari chapter 6 . 12/4/2007
So ... they assume, first that the blood is all hers. They also assume that she is dead ... of course, it was Ron who first jumped to the conclusion and has thus ruffled Harry ... oh boy. But nice addage to the plot! :)
Yemi Hikari chapter 5 . 12/4/2007
Ron's never been very brigh has he ... oh ... wait ... Hermione is the brains in the couple ... how sad ...
Yemi Hikari chapter 4 . 12/4/2007
Concidering that he only is doing this for revenge on Harry ... he isn't mad at the 'Mudblood' ... nice yet again.
Yemi Hikari chapter 3 . 12/4/2007
Interesting, so the only reason that Draco is even going to kill her is for revenge. He's already stated in this chapter that he truely, deep down, doesn't want to kill her, in fact the only reason he;s having something to do with her is revenge on Harry. Very well written.
Yemi Hikari chapter 2 . 12/4/2007
Lol - Nice second chapter. You are so far keeping this in character. It's going to be fun to see how you turn this into a Draco/Hermione fic.
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