Reviews for Sacrifice
Mrs.Sparrodeppabbersandsroux chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
I'll be damned. That was beautiful. If I could cry I would. You touched my weasley black guts with purity. Thanx a mill.
Zippie chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
I quite liked this, although it didn't make me cry. That's probably because I didn't know the character who died. I hadn't become attached to her because this was only a oneshot. Had this been a chapter in a longer fic where I had developed an affection for the character this would have seemed a lot sadder. It's well written though. One minor criticism, I don't remember Jack ever saying 'ye' instead of 'you' in the movies.

Favourite line: “Completely ruined. I’ll have to rid ye of it.”

That was very poignant - a bit of gallows humour, making the loss seem even worse.

However, you seem to have some sort of review written at the bottom of the chapter. I'm assuming this is a note from a beta reader that you meant to remove.