I'm translating the Aeneid right now for class...and when I read the part of Dido...I felt very depressed, this story cheered me up with its "what could have been" mentality...and I absolutely loved it...Your writing is superb and I can totally imagine this happening...

Marvelous. Amazing writing and a fascinating concept. The only thing I would have liked to have seen would be a bit more developement of Dido's personality, but it's fine really.

This was quite good, I like reading alternative versions on Greek myths and I happen to be reading book four of the Aeneid at the moment so I had to have a look this. A nice change from one of Dido's many speeches :)