|Reviews for A Midsummer Night's Beauty|
| Shinzochi chapter 56 . 3/14
i have been thinking and i realized that what is sad most is that technically Soun Tendo is the one responsible for Akane doing all of this, i realize he was mourning his wife but if he had manned up and been their for his daughters then Akane would have been taught further in martial arts and wouldn't have became complacent and there for wouldn't have had as much of the problems with Ranma's skill as she did so there would have been a lot less negativity between her and Ranma, looking forward to finding out what happens next
| OZ x OZ chapter 56 . 3/14
Oh snap, the shit is hitting the fan now.
Has anyone ever toldya that your work is better than Takahashi's?
| Ganheim chapter 55 . 2/18
It was a form of torture in a way
[‘form of’ and ‘in a way’ repeat the exact same sentiment]
Ryoga was incredibly torn
[Although I’m not nearly as picky as many in my writers’ group, I recommend avoiding –ly words in many circumstances. Here in particular it really adds nothing, the idea is strong and complete as-is]
The technical aspects of your writing are excellent. Your plot and character progression are good, and I’m looking forward to your next chapter.
| Blissfull Wulf chapter 55 . 2/4
Took me a little while, but I finally got caught up to the current chapter. I loved it, very well done, now to sit down and wait for more, keep up the good work.
| XellossLina chapter 55 . 1/23
Too bad to hear people have given up on your fanfic, it's really great work keep going
| Meech Macko chapter 55 . 1/16
Well, Akane always wanted things to go her way being treated like a princess...I mean, she always had a WEAK mindset, so Possessing her is too easy of Jusenkyo.
Soun has been too lax on Akane and made Kasumi do all the hard work plus Nabiki to mange money and in the end its Soun's fault to just simply do nothing a and sit there like a log...he did not rectify his youngest daughter.
Realistically I would have preferred Ranma ended with Xian Pu or Ukyo and Akane is just too immature at time...well so is Ranma but he was raise half-time in the wilderness with Genma.
In canon Ranma was just a puppet ...he was never give a choice and only to be lead on...the girls just treated him like a prize but still better than Akane.
Xian pu and Ukyo are strong than Akane in Martial arts and such...yeah cooking too.
If only Ranma weren't too oblivious and rude at times...things could have went smoothly.
| Meech Macko chapter 54 . 1/15
Ranma with Curse is not realistically good and I mean if he had kids they would be odd if their True Male gender father can turn to a girl...
Sure, the Curse is good for comedy and occasional cracks but in a realism mod fic its not that good.
I like Ranma Xian pu pair up and anything other than forever done Akane...Akane is the weakest of the girls compared with Xian Pu and Ukyo ...if they are serious they can take on Akane fine.
Another note Ranma 1/2 is purely comedy parody fic with his curse ...A slight realism mod fic means curse can be a bit too wacky.
Most fics have him discard his ORIGINAL gender and him surrendering to his curse gender...
| xArtehx chapter 6 . 1/15
Dunno, I've always been a fan of the curse. Not sure I like the fact you cured him.
| xArtehx chapter 1 . 1/15
So i always have a hard time liking shampoo these days, in the anime and manga she was the one I wanted him to end with the most next to Ukyo, but if I read a fanfiction where she's not the focus the amazons tend to be villains or get "bashed", or i read the one where she is, shes a dumb bimbo, or so it seems. I've seen yours up for awhile and I'm trying it now. Just wanted to say, I like how your portraying her. Usually the only ones i find where she's likeable is where she gives up cause it's a Ranma-Chan fic and they become Shield-Sisters. Thanks for this.
| KJC71790 chapter 55 . 1/13
Is Meilin from Cardcaptor Sakura ?
| kami-of-chaos chapter 55 . 1/10
May I be one of the first to say. Yahoooo! That is all
| Artful Lounger chapter 55 . 1/10
Well it took a few months, but the time has come. Strap yourselves in folks we're in for a wild ride.
| Shinzochi chapter 55 . 1/10
i really would like to see that General tortured to death and the scythe being in their room has me very concerned and i look forward to the next chapter
| Hiryo chapter 54 . 11/25/2013
Yay thanks for the great update. Made me curious how you continue it
| Koneko Saotome chapter 6 . 11/20/2013
Yeah...No more curse? I'm done...Sorry, but it can't be "Ranma 1/2" without the curse, too bad; I had such hopes for this story too.