Reviews for Hidden Truth
beh chapter 26 . 4/8
Honestly. I can't decide if I liked it.
It's idk too dramatic and no coordination can't follow it.
Some chapters were cute some pretty annoying.
And I hate the fact that Bella's character was idk kind of weak. It didn't take her time to fall for Edward. Beh
j.obiesie17 chapter 1 . 3/11
This had a good plot, but was a little confusing. Overall a great story.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/25/2015
That comment about vampires cant have kids is soooo funny now after that last book! But great story can't stop reading it!
Guest chapter 11 . 5/10/2015
crazycats7 chapter 25 . 1/11/2015
this was a good story, but no one ever forgets who people are after they have tried to commit suicide. He should have been put into therapy and he would have learned why he became a womanizer and why he treated Bella so shabbily. I think this would have made a better story and also him trying to get Bella back, by trying to show her he had changed. Bella was wrong to keep his child away but she was hurt and scared.
Scattycow chapter 2 . 9/22/2014
I don't think English is your native tongue; it shows.
You should have used a beta. This is really badly written.
KahtLynn chapter 12 . 7/14/2014
He should become vampire
Miss.SummerLynnWhitlock chapter 26 . 4/15/2014
This was an amazing story! I loved it so much and some parts were so hilarious! :)
Loveforwolves143 chapter 23 . 3/14/2014
I could not stop laughing at the ending to this chapter its just to funny
Itsalexxis chapter 23 . 12/26/2013
Grandpa Charlie, let's go fuck had me dying
Itsalexxis chapter 6 . 12/25/2013
Did they use a condom
cheshtha chapter 26 . 12/14/2013
this story is not good. please donot right ever ever this kind of story ever again
AsccsMovies chapter 23 . 7/25/2013
I laughed my head off at the fucking part! hehe. fuuunnnnyyyy. :)
AsccsMovies chapter 26 . 7/25/2013
BOOM. I loved the story... its amazing! I think your a bit young to write lemons though... but oh well! is that you on your profile pic? your name is Shirley right? anyway, its really good and I should of read it earlier.
I know how you feel with all the laziness and stuff, I'm as lazy as fuck nowadays :\ either way, its an amazing story and I will read your other fanfics... if you have any, I havnt checked yet.
keep writing!
Acssc Movies
Guest chapter 3 . 6/17/2013
To tell u the truth I hate it
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