Reviews for The Center Will Hold
BlissBeMine chapter 5 . 11/1/2007
ah cliffhanger! great story, can't wait to see what you write next!
WeHaveACase chapter 5 . 11/1/2007
Holy shit...update soon!
BlissBeMine chapter 4 . 11/1/2007
great story so far. i luv the last paragraph of chapter 4, so incredibly cute!
ParadigmShiftAhead chapter 5 . 11/1/2007
Wow - surprise! That cliffie hit me like a mac truck - nice work. Can't wait to see the outcome...
beaglelvr93 chapter 5 . 11/1/2007
OH MY gOSH SO MEAN UPDATE AND FIXY NOW!
hmfrongillo chapter 5 . 11/1/2007
the WHAT of her WHAT?

WHAT?
The Demon's Song chapter 5 . 11/1/2007
Evilness...

Well, I love your story.

And I just noticed you've been reviewing mine- When It Matters. Thanks :)

But back to your story.

Well, the cliffie was evil, but it's still a great story.

Booth Bones awkwardness isn't good! At least get them back to normal soon, please. Oh, don't get me wrong: it doesn't detract from your story. It's just... well, they're perfect for each other, and they're fighting... it's almost tragic.

Anyways, 8.5-9/10.

Best of luck, and keep posting!

Song
spacekid77 chapter 5 . 11/1/2007
Wowwowwow! Lucky pen indeed!

Really enjoyed the "bickering" at the beginning... their argument and Booth's line "You do the science-y stuff and I interrogate suspects. Not the other way around. That’s how this team-thing works remember?" made me wonder - if Brennan ever really did feel confident enough with suspect interactions, would it indeed throw their partnership out-of-sync? You've got to admit she has really advanced since the 1st season! But I guess if nothing else she would still need Booth for his badge and gun! I digress...

Great chapter!
xhio chapter 5 . 11/1/2007
OMG!

and now? O_O

You have tocontinue as soon as possible, please!
o0MissBennet0o chapter 5 . 11/1/2007
Loved the chapter, and good cliffie!

I have a very similar story, and I hope you don't feel like I'm copying your stuff just because I love your fic. I just hope we're going on diferent directions with it!

Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter! Tha pen sure is lucky!
K.T chapter 5 . 11/1/2007
Really loving this story so far! Your characterization is amazing. And now a cliffie? Can't wait to see what happens next!
Kia Grrl chapter 5 . 11/1/2007
GAh! You can't leave it at that, that's mean!
spacekid77 chapter 4 . 10/31/2007
It's your attention to the minutiae that really sets you apart... Jack calling Angela "Angie" in his thoughts, Booth living in a house (I always thought he did too - from 'Man in the SUV' and the half-dressed Tessa scene *shudder*), his love for fixing up old cars...

The ending of this chapter was perfect. Booth's reaction to his realization was very believable to me - he felt like he'd been hit by lightning! And the last line was just priceless!

Can't wait for more!

Sonya
spacekid77 chapter 3 . 10/31/2007
As I've said in my other reviews, dead-on characterization (I can probably stop saying that over and over now, right? ;o).

Booth and Max convo was perfect... just what does Max have up his sleeve?

Great job fleshing out the character of Sam Fletcher. (Also like how she has a unisex name.) I like her... even though she is "the other woman"!

Angela's line at the end - LOL!
spacekid77 chapter 2 . 10/31/2007
"His bluff and bluster, the sheer maleness of it all, was delicious to watch." This line just screams Angela!

"tappity-tappity-tappity" Booth better look out... Bren is getting good!

And the convo w/ Caroline (I luv her and you never see her in fanfic!) was just dead-on... God you could so write for this show!
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