|Reviews for Dragon Master|
| Randel chapter 1 . 6/23
I remember reading this more than ten years ago, back in college. It's got a lot of the charm that I remember and the writing holds up well, certainly better than my own. Aurora and Laine are spunky and the plot feels like a real coming of age story.
| WyldClaw chapter 2 . 1/1
HA! that was so wicked awesome that Aurora and Scar beat falkner and they didn't even know it until blackthorn city! for her first battle i think aurora kicked butt!
what plan of giovanni's is clair involved with?
| mrsHatake777 chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
What happened? D: Why'd you take this story off wattpad? Where'd you goooo?
| ThePokeNerd chapter 7 . 3/4/2013
Did you got the name Frightful from the book my side of the mountain?
| ThePokeNerd chapter 5 . 3/4/2013
Aurora Should've gotten the Espeon. By the way it's Espeon not Esperon.
| ThePokeNerd chapter 4 . 2/21/2013
So, I re-read the summery of the sequel to this story then I thought about what pokemon Aurora has and I think she is going to become Falkners student.
| no name chapter 4 . 7/14/2012
Looool Clair is the bad *woman*! good thing, too, as I never liked her. Both in the games and the anime she was sooo arrogant and overly sure of herself. But I hope for ya that ya don't make Lance the antagonist! I actually like the dragon-master, and he's way better than Clair anyways.
| Shaylynne chapter 11 . 7/4/2012
omg. amazing. *gets all teary*. amazing.
| Shaylynne chapter 9 . 7/4/2012
yay, morty likes jasmine D
the story's going great so far, much better quality than regular pokemon fics. i like it. :) but, well, jasmine's the only gym leader i had trouble against, and i had all the type advantages when i challenged her. of course, I'm not telling you to change anything - just pointing out aurora shouldn't have won the match that easily. but apart from that, this is mostly a very good story. keep on the good work. _
| bubbahcakes chapter 11 . 3/27/2012
I have 3 words for this story: OMG. This has got to be the best Pokemon fic I've seen to date. I must say: You pulled the underdog defeating the tyrant thing PERFECTLY in this one. I will confess: This is highly Mary-Sue. But in my opinion, that's exactly what made it excellent! Good read man, I'm gonna read the sequel now. Peace!
I bestow upon this fic the Bubbahcakes stamp of approval.
| Draco Oblivion chapter 11 . 3/8/2012
Lol Ember's going on a walk with Aurora, aren't they cute together? X3
That's a good point, Aurora's shown she's more worthy of the badges than Clair who just fought...
WOOOOOO! Giovanni vs Ember, epic XD
Hehe Aurora does deserve a better trainer than Clair and she's going to prove it :D
Woooo! Laine's destroying her friend's gang, yay her :D
"Type advantage's no substitute for experience!" "Experience this!" Epic... XD
Aw, Scar got taken out but in a fight like this where moves are rarely used I'd be surprised to see a small birdtake down a dragon...
Hehehe, Rusty's insults are amazing XD
Wow, seems like nothing can stop Clair...
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSS! I was hoping Spearow'd evolve in this fight, I knew it'd have to be now if ever because I couldn't see him going round town with Aurora as a Fearow XD
Lol at "I always have hope" I love Ember's lines XD
Wow, Giovanni and Lance seem weirdly close...
Hehe, Ember talked to the dratini, do I hear the sound of an affinity? XD
Aw, the new Dragon Master Ember had a moment with Aurora :3
She's going to be an apprentice too :3
| Draco Oblivion chapter 10 . 3/8/2012
Flying through your sleep is pretty cool XD
Aw, so Laine doesn't seem upste at Aurora atleast since she can continue to tease her about boyfriends :3
LOOOOL at Pryce, seemed to know a long line of Falkner's ancestors and apparently like Aurora new hero they weren't brave either XD
Skarmory could take his pokemon on...
Nice one Giovanni! Put Clair in her place and don't back down, atleast you have honour!
Aw, isn't Clair tragic, even Giovanni's given up on her :(
Aw, Scar's been put away...
Aw, Ember's back :3
I guess Laine's less happy with Ember after finding out her dad was killed by rockets :(
So the ones guilty for the murder would have been horrifically punished and Ember wasn't even alive at the time, good arguments for not blaming him :)
Lol Ember thought he could just go to town, not likely XD
Lol, Articuno's harsh, wasn't expecting a death threat XD
Yay she's got Articuno, everything's set for the final battle! :D
| Draco Oblivion chapter 9 . 3/8/2012
Jasmine's been framed! :O
Wow Morty's kind of scary the way he got so furious about Jasmine's arrest...
Aw, even the infallible Falkner can't convince the sergent to free Jasmine...
Hehehehe I KNEW it! Morty has a crush, she's his favourite gym leader and he's really protective of her, topped off by the fact he blushed when she noticed him leads to only one conclusion! XD
at Ember kidnapping the Rocket members and leaving the gym leader X''''D
Yay even if she hda to fight for the chance Aurora finally got to battle for her badge rather than just having it handed to her :)
Nice battle, slowly wearing the steelix down was pretty tactical :)
Wow that was a sad end of a chapter, having Laine silent after hearing her dad was killed by team rocket... I want to know what's going on in her head :(
| Draco Oblivion chapter 8 . 3/6/2012
Aw, Hope was a magikarp :3
I like the story, Hope is his only hope for showing his own ability, demonstrating that he isn't just what he is due to other's help he can be independent and powerful :)
Aw, Aurora and Ember are so cute together :')
LOOOOOOL at Laine checking out the guy wrestling the Machoke, now Aurora can finally turn the tables XD
Hehehe poor guy first beaten by a psychic, the Ember and now finally Aurora'll beat him XD
LOOOOOOOOL at EMber and Aurora's fight XD
Aw, Ember got the badge for her and even called her a friend :')
Aw, fire and ice dancing the night away :')
| Draco Oblivion chapter 7 . 3/6/2012
I like the way that was put, Morty's a good person but not a nice person. :D
Aw, Laine's lucky she just randomly gets these pokemon and badges, it's all so easy for her XD
Ember's soooo harsh for not wanting to help his girlfriend when she saved him from the well AND helped get his pokemon back :/
Aw, Ember's gotten all protective of his friends :3
Aw, Clair's true natue has finally been revealed to her biggest fan :3
Aw, she named her new crobat Frightful, I'm glad he's helped her overcome her fear though :)