Reviews for Penal Servitude
Guest chapter 23 . 5/7
captivating story. very well written, thank you!
whitehound chapter 15 . 7/7/2016
I'm re-reading this, and although you corrected Narcissa's hair in chapter 13 the correction somehow didn't take - you've still got her with black hair like her sisters, although I like Jean's suggestion that she might be a *dyed* blonde.
Guest chapter 23 . 6/10/2016
This was an amazing story, very much portrayed the unbreakable side we all know and love about Snape, I wished it was a bit longer though. Is it too late for a sequel?
RainCityWriter chapter 23 . 6/8/2015
I enjoyed this story very much. Your characterization of Snape is very on-character, and the suspense and storytelling were excellent. Thanks!
scgaraycochea chapter 23 . 1/12/2015
Wow! A powerful story!
I really loved it, thank you for share it with us. I love the character of Severus and you did an incredible job keeping him as he is the the books.
You are a great writing I will be reading more of your fics.
hpsslily chapter 23 . 7/22/2014
Some more of harry would have been preferred
But good one!
guest chapter 23 . 9/28/2013
wow, good story and undervalued if you count the number of reviews...
whovian chapter 23 . 9/25/2013
I only have one word: wonderful. What an amazing story. I read all of it in one sitting. The absolute best fanfiction I have read in months. You are very talented, and I loved the way you hinted at some of the more graphic parts but didn't let the story dissolve into porn. I hope you keep writing, you're wonderful at it!
muumi2three chapter 23 . 7/15/2013
The story kept me reading from chapter to chapter without wanting to take time to review! (Those cliffhangers can work against the author's desire for reviews.) The surprising departure from the usual cliches of "slave fiction" and foray into mystery and action/adventure was extremely well done and makes for a very satisfying tale with a lot of twists and turns that really took my breath away. Severus's return to Azkhaban for instance. Utterly unexpected, very well written in plot and characterization. Kudos!
Lorteck chapter 23 . 5/16/2013
This was an amazing story. I expected a slave fic, and out came an intense action story. It was great, and I couldn't put it down. Thanks for posting.
221Bfandomlocked4 chapter 23 . 5/3/2013
Wow, your story had me in suspense for so long! I just think that the ending was a little abrupt. But great plot twists!
jazzy2may2 chapter 23 . 12/27/2012
VEry well written, i cried and was sad and was overjoyed at the victory that finally came in the end.
Ivycloak chapter 10 . 9/28/2012
Yay! A decent severus slave fic! THANK YOU!
Hephzibah06 chapter 23 . 3/30/2012
A very excellent Snape story. I really hope you will do another soon.
Eregnar chapter 5 . 10/18/2011

Somebody needs to take Dawlish down a few notches.
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