Reviews for Penal Servitude
guest chapter 23 . 9/28/2013
wow, good story and undervalued if you count the number of reviews...
whovian chapter 23 . 9/25/2013
I only have one word: wonderful. What an amazing story. I read all of it in one sitting. The absolute best fanfiction I have read in months. You are very talented, and I loved the way you hinted at some of the more graphic parts but didn't let the story dissolve into porn. I hope you keep writing, you're wonderful at it!
muumi2three chapter 23 . 7/15/2013
The story kept me reading from chapter to chapter without wanting to take time to review! (Those cliffhangers can work against the author's desire for reviews.) The surprising departure from the usual cliches of "slave fiction" and foray into mystery and action/adventure was extremely well done and makes for a very satisfying tale with a lot of twists and turns that really took my breath away. Severus's return to Azkhaban for instance. Utterly unexpected, very well written in plot and characterization. Kudos!
Lorteck chapter 23 . 5/16/2013
This was an amazing story. I expected a slave fic, and out came an intense action story. It was great, and I couldn't put it down. Thanks for posting.
221Bfandomlocked4 chapter 23 . 5/3/2013
Wow, your story had me in suspense for so long! I just think that the ending was a little abrupt. But great plot twists!
jazzy2may2 chapter 23 . 12/27/2012
VEry well written, i cried and was sad and was overjoyed at the victory that finally came in the end.
Ivycloak chapter 10 . 9/28/2012
Yay! A decent severus slave fic! THANK YOU!
Hephzibah06 chapter 23 . 3/30/2012
A very excellent Snape story. I really hope you will do another soon.
Eregnar chapter 5 . 10/18/2011
*wince*

Somebody needs to take Dawlish down a few notches.
Eregnar chapter 4 . 10/18/2011
Poor Lucius. That's just sick.
Eregnar chapter 2 . 10/18/2011
Ummm... careful Snape. It's not good to eat too much too quickly when you've been starving... You don't have the right enzymes in your stomach to break it all down...
Eregnar chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
Phew. Arthur. Good. At least, I'm assuming so?
Yaa chapter 23 . 6/13/2011
What a page-turner! (I guess they'll need to come up with an e-version of that expression)

You did a phenomenal job with keeping everyone in character and with building suspense. I'm glad the Order didn't abandon Severus, and he finally gets the recognition he deserves.

Would you kindly write a sequel? Or at least more Harry Potter fanfiction. I agree with Dominatubba, would love to see Severus tell Harry about Lily. I imagine Severus still has a lot of recovering to do, too.
Ms Llewellyn chapter 23 . 6/4/2011
this was awsome! totally faving it! Bye! Severus is so cool! lol
Zireael07 chapter 23 . 5/17/2011
I love the story, I've read it multiple times and I never ceased to like it. I only hope it will be marked as complete... at first I thought there's more to come...
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