|Reviews for A MidSummer's Night Cream|
| xNaruHina chapter 6 . 11/5/2016
The fuck? Why did he take her virginity with a dildo instead of himself? What? That makes absolutely no sense.
| True Brit chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
This just has to be about the worst story layout I ever clapped eyes on.
This writer really really REALLY needs to read some one else's work to see how a story should be laid out. I mean three people all speaking in one paragraph with no breaks in between them.
Then there is also the fact that he chapter only consists of two paragraphs. I only got half way through the first few lines and found it impossible to read any more...
| dpeterso chapter 6 . 6/25/2009
not bad. A good story line. I await future chapters.
| fhgfgcvyt chapter 6 . 8/3/2008
good but a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes. good work!
| sasukegirl4 chapter 6 . 2/10/2008
Love this couple
| EGYx3D chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
This is a great story. Keep on writing.
| LaX-Girl-6 chapter 6 . 12/8/2007
coolio story post more soon
| corytheman chapter 3 . 12/6/2007
i cant tell whos speaking sometimes
| dbzgtfan2004 chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
This is a good story. Please continue. Harry and Hermione forever.
| K59 chapter 5 . 11/18/2007
I HATE You! Actually hate cliffies, and therefore you for putting one here! I can't wait to read what comes next!
| TooManyIdeasToHold chapter 5 . 11/16/2007
I wonder what the rest of the note said. Snicker...
| TooManyIdeasToHold chapter 4 . 11/16/2007
Good. I wonder what Harry's birthday PRESENT will be. Snicker.
| TooManyIdeasToHold chapter 3 . 11/16/2007
Also good. What the heck is 'Mione planning? HM?
| TooManyIdeasToHold chapter 2 . 11/16/2007
This a good chapter as well. Forward...March!
| TooManyIdeasToHold chapter 1 . 11/16/2007
Holy shit! Depictive! Good, nonetheless.