|Reviews for Imperial Intelligence' Isn't that an Oxymoron?|
| PollyWantCookie chapter 1 . 2/12/2009
Probably should have read the story you mentioned above aforehand, but as it is I don't understand anything at all. Well written, nonetheless.
| skywalker05 chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
Heh...the prose is good-clear, with proper grammar and such. The story itself is rather disturbing-I'd put the genre as 'horror' actually. Palpatine's talk about eating aliens is nicely in character, but then I was rather confused about what he was doing while the creepy woman, Isard, and Jonas were fighting. Had he just set the whole thing up to get rid of some lackeys? I can see that. I'd also like more characterization of Jonas...or at least more of a basis for his relationship with Isard. He's almost a 'Gary Stue' character, put there to save Isard, although it's good that you don't put the focus on him for the whole thing. Decent work. I gotta agree with the other reviewer that it's "odd".
| FREAKSHOW1 chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
Hmm. This was...odd. But in a good way.
| Kristine93 chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
Hey! Very nice beginning, really exciting! Can't wait to see more of it. _