Reviews for Unraveled
PhoenixWytch chapter 2 . 1/14/2011

Thanks for writing.
Gorram.Doll chapter 2 . 3/30/2009

Tears in my eyes... _
frannie chapter 2 . 9/23/2008
omg, that was perfect.
Sci F.I. Warper chapter 2 . 8/15/2008
Aw. Cute. Realistic and just a little bittersweet. The perfect kind of romance to characterize Mal and River. Great job!
fallenfromgrace17 chapter 2 . 11/10/2007
Oh! That is soo good! Poor River...

I understand what she is going through though.
hereswith chapter 2 . 10/22/2007
Lovely angst, and I really, really like your style of writing.
PlayKate chapter 2 . 10/20/2007
Wow. Very good. I'd love to read more. Go Sox.
writtenwordlover chapter 1 . 10/19/2007
Usually Mal/River don't interest me, but this was tender and sad. And River reading the signals wrong. And Simon understanding the hurt of a first love. Nice work, I'm off to read your site.
leiasky chapter 1 . 10/19/2007
Oh this was sad but very well written. Your chapter 1 and 2 are the same, though, was that intentional?