|Reviews for Trying|
| sexisami chapter 5 . 1/31/2009
more please ]
| twilightbloom chapter 4 . 1/27/2009
Wow! what an interesting twist...I didn't see THIS coming! Thinking about it though, it makes sense and in a way it IS canon. Very nicely done.
I really hope you update this soon!
| TwilightxoEclipse chapter 5 . 7/23/2008
sweet ! can't wait for more
| writerscraftpen chapter 5 . 6/9/2008
lmao awkward for eddie lol nyways really good add more!
| SassyReaderGirl chapter 5 . 4/25/2008
he should be more tortured. he hates seeing bella in any kind of pain, especially this
| Mrs.SophieCullen chapter 5 . 2/25/2008
| theothercullen427 chapter 5 . 2/6/2008
good good good good good! more please!
| jazbabe621 chapter 5 . 2/6/2008
such a good story! definitely wasnt expecting that to happen! cant wait to read more ]
| SisterGrimmErin chapter 5 . 2/4/2008
I want Rosalie to continue!
| tu es mon ame chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
very good. :D
| tu es mon ame chapter 5 . 1/3/2008
oh this is really good. quite exciting. certainly didnt expect that to happen lol
| AdelphaHighbrow chapter 5 . 1/1/2008
I've always thought that it would be venom. I wondered about that. Unfortuantly, Stephenie Meyer is a bit too much of a prude to tell us.
But I like this! I want to see what happens. Please hurry and keep writing. You're the best Twilight "intimacy" writer on here.
| Micheala Howell-Lester chapter 5 . 12/27/2007
Oh, please continue this story! It is really good and it leaves you on edge.
| KobrahEdo chapter 5 . 12/22/2007
| Ine-sama chapter 5 . 12/13/2007
poor bella. T_T
that would SERIOUSLY suck.