Reviews for Thirteen Days
Pjlover666 chapter 19 . 1/7/2012
*sniff* *sniff*

*deep breath*

This was amazing. It was filled with emotion and I couldn't help but let out a couple of tears when Jazz parted with Prowl...

Poor Prowl...this war took everything from him. Everything...

Amazing story. Amazing...

Kid Death chapter 19 . 4/24/2011
This story just had it all. I laughed my aft off, cackled evilly with Jazz/Ariel when they massacred the bad guys, cried my eyes out pretty much constantly there at the end. It's a great, wonderful, amazing story and I love it all the more because it struck all those emotions. I'm such a Jazz/Prowl fan. I love happy endings and I hate that this story doesn't end with the two together happily (and alive), but I also love it because it's so rare that one finds such a well written dark, death story like this. Cheers to you, mate.
yamiishot chapter 19 . 4/18/2011
Aww Jazz ;-;
animelover1993 chapter 19 . 12/30/2010
Dude this was amazing. I loved the murderous Jazz/Ariel. It was so entertaining to read.

Great fic!
Twisted Skys chapter 16 . 9/9/2008
I love the exchange between her and Jazz. So quick and snappy and contridicting eachother. It was very funny.
Kitra13 chapter 19 . 6/17/2008
what... You made me cry... Well at least poor Jazz got his Bye Bye prowl... I'm lucky for the rest of them but JAZ! And that Show of an good bye... just like Jazz ...
Carmilla DeWinter chapter 19 . 5/11/2008
Well, this was an interesting, sometimes intense and well-written ride.

And I don't think you should agonize over the epilogue.
ArmoredSoul chapter 19 . 5/10/2008
At least he got to say good-bye.
Daisydill chapter 19 . 5/10/2008
lovely ending. And at least Prowl has moved on, so to speak.
Cyndi chapter 19 . 5/10/2008
This whole story was just...incredible...I'm speechless. Speechless! You are awesome!
Silveriss chapter 19 . 5/9/2008
Not that I have a problem with your Epilogue but I think I would have liked a little more explaining how Ariel and Prowl are coping with the loss of Jazz now. It almost seems like they are completely recovered here and are just plain returning home, as if after some ill-conceived but rather mild adventure. Then again, that's my take on it. Feel free to ignore me if you disagree.
blood shifter chapter 19 . 5/9/2008
i still feel sorry for prowl. thats gotta be so hard. awesome chapter.
LittleMewLugia chapter 19 . 5/9/2008
Loved the last three lines...:)

AMAPADME chapter 19 . 5/9/2008
no I thought that was an alright ending.

I enjoyed the story alot thanks for writing it.
ArmoredSoul chapter 18 . 5/7/2008
Dear Primus above...


Don't go...
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