Reviews for In The Mouth Of The Rat
slystir chapter 9 . 8/26/2013
Wow. Okay. I read this story before, when I hadn't read very much brotherhood stuff. I gotta say, I loved it even more the second time. Your characterization was great. I loved the idea too of an ancient evil making use of Internet porn to lure their victims in.

You are awesome!
slakalot chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
I just love this AU and this is an awesome, inventive story. I love how you write Dean and loved him creating the rock salt shells. You give the characters a wonderful depth. Thanks for a fantastic read! X
Voldemort- Coolest Badguy EVER chapter 9 . 9/9/2010
Ahh, the end of another fantabulous story. And my gosh, did this chapter give me a good laugh.

Jason made a clicking noise with his mouth. He then stared at Jim. "Him too?"

Jim stared down the other man through his reading glasses. "Pardon me?"

Dean snorted. Jason assumed the pastor was also one of the siren's victims. "This is Pastor Jim. He's a friend. He's always been that old." Dean winced at his poor choice of words.

"What?" Jim said sharply.

"You know what I mean," Dean retorted.

Hilarious! And I absolutely love the description of Jim as "The Guardian. Like the pope, but cooler."

Aww yeah. 8)

Yes, I very much enjoyed this story. Thanks for the awesome read.

- Coolest Badguy EVER
Voldemort- Coolest Badguy EVER chapter 8 . 9/9/2010
And now we have sirens - yet another idea presented (in an entirely different way) in a Supernatural episode. Are you SURE they're not taking your plotlines? *looks around suspiciously*

For this chapter, all I'm gonna say is:




"And that's why he's paid the big bucks." Dean gestured to Jim as he grinned at Caleb.

- Coolest Badguy EVER
Voldemort- Coolest Badguy EVER chapter 7 . 9/9/2010

"Crazy monkey dance?" Jim repeated the words slowly.

I was laughing so hard at that one! And I love seeing Jim being all protective and ... Guardian-y. Yeah. 8)

Very cute chapter. Dean was hilarious!

- Coolest Badguy EVER
Voldemort- Coolest Badguy EVER chapter 6 . 9/9/2010
Poor old Dean. And yet he still has his attitude. Eighty or not, he can give as good as he gets with Caleb. 8)

I love Jim coming to the rescue for "his boys". Very sweet! ...Oh, I miss him. 8(

Wonderful stuff, yet again.

- Coolest Badguy EVER
Voldemort- Coolest Badguy EVER chapter 5 . 9/9/2010
Oh, wow! I just realised which story this is, and it has spurred another moment of deja vu.

You and Ridley have come up with many different storylines, but it's kinda spooky when you come up with something like this which is later replicated in a Supernatural episode.

Granted, in the show, Dean aging is the result of a lost poker game with a witch/warlock, but still, the similarities are amazing... Sure they're not stealing your plots? ;)

- Coolest Badguy EVER
Voldemort- Coolest Badguy EVER chapter 4 . 9/8/2010
And the mystery deepens!

As usual, Dean and Caleb has some great back-and-forths there, which were brilliantly written and very funny. 8)

Another awesome piece of the puzzle.

- Coolest Badguy EVER
Voldemort- Coolest Badguy EVER chapter 3 . 9/8/2010
Oh, you gotta love OC's - so much mystery and drama! Who should they trust? Who should they shoot in the face with a rifle? Choices, choices.

I liked that you had Dean working on a way to shoot rock salt; so many stories show him as all brawn and no brain, so the Brotherhood stories are a refreshing changes.

The suspense is building - fantastic chapter.

- Coolest Badguy EVER
Voldemort- Coolest Badguy EVER chapter 2 . 9/8/2010
A nice, gentle path into the story - and what's not to love about any kind of Dean/Caleb interaction? Always makes me smile. 8)

I'm intrigued, to say the least, about this story - I can't for the life of me remember what it's about, so onward!

- Coolest Badguy EVER
Voldemort- Coolest Badguy EVER chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
Ahh, the start of a new story! Always so exciting. 8)

Poor Caleb has jumped right into the deep end with his emotional angst, so I'm interested to see where it goes from here.

And Dean was very cute just at the end there, trying to convince Caleb to let him handle it. Aww. Brotherly Love! ;)

Liking it!

- Coolest Badguy EVER
PrInCeSsFBi chapter 9 . 4/14/2008

it is me


I read this on SV website at school-the only one that isn't blocked- and by the end of the class i had about three people sitting around me reading it along. We eventually just had to read it out loud. Teacher wasn't in the room Lol

Anyway love you guys
sams1ra chapter 9 . 12/12/2007
I knew they were sirens the moment you described the house ;)

Still don't get why you chose greek names, but ok.

It was a good story.
dudeedaisy chapter 9 . 12/8/2007
good ending. dean's back to his old self and the bad guys dead. liked the added touch with the phone and the relationship between john and dean, poor bloke! at least he has caleb!

i enjoyed this story, well done and i look forward to reading your next one!

all the best

dudeedaisy x
gretchless chapter 9 . 12/8/2007
hey, sorry have been crap with reveiws since i started me new job ! i am just fitting in reading the chapters so i hope you dont mind the lack of reveiws !

i think its been a great story rather weird and hard to imagine but great at the same time !

oh and the him too about jim was to funny for words it had me cracked up ! which is a very good thing as i have just finshed reading ridleys story which had my cryin lol !

okay i dont know when i will be able to reply again but i will be reading and you write !

bye for now !
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