|Reviews for Whispers In The Dark|
| Teeny Tiny Twilight chapter 1 . 5/17/2008
_ WOOT! thats awsome! :P you rock my socks and the ending is fine!
| oirishgoddess chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
twilight-just read new moon (waiting for eclipse to come...) and arent they just some of the best books E.V.E.R?
bella and edward-he said yes! they are married! she will be a vampire! wow.
excellent!-really amazing for only your 2nd fic (thats right, isnt it?) and i am now probably gonna spend around 2ish hours looking at vampire fics. wohhoo
WELL DONE! :)
| Jello chapter 1 . 10/20/2007
it was okay, just don't keep repeating words and make sure you get edward's dialouge right. remember he is old fashioned so dont make him do something he would not usually do.
| DahliaPeesly chapter 1 . 10/20/2007
Wow that was really good. I really didn't think it was that out of character, if you ask me! Anyways nicely done.
| KlaineBowX chapter 1 . 10/20/2007
love im in love
| mrs.cullen22 chapter 1 . 10/20/2007
it kinda felt a little rushed, but very sweet nonetheless. good job :)
| tospeakof chapter 1 . 10/20/2007
Very good! I'd love it if you wrote some more - about during the change, Edward's side to the story, after the change etc etc!
| wingedspirit chapter 1 . 10/20/2007
It's good you could definatly add more to and I hope you do.