Would LOVE to see this develop as a full piece. Have read hundreds of XMen FFs and this is by far one of the most unique and intriguing conceptions of Rogue I've ever come across. LOVED.

That's intense. It sounds like the intro to an epic Horror/Action movie. The kind where the "bad" guy dies, and there's one person at the end, just trudging on, somehow managing to continue afterward. There would be a message/moral-thing like: 'no matter what happens, life continues' or 'with strength of will, you can survive' or something else equal parts cliche and epic.

Nice!

Damn good writing…although a bit confusing at the beginning

excellent dark story

this was indeed dark but i feel as tho this is just the begining... even if you don't continue i still see this more as a introduction of the begining of a story or a introduction of what will happen in the middle and that you will build up to it and continue on...

your writing has this originality about it ( kinda forget if original means brand new or someting every one does but in this case think of it as something new)

i really do hope you continue it but if you odnt i wont be heartbroken

Woah. That's all I can say. Woah.

Cool. I liked the mystery concept. I think I have it down, though... She killed Xavier? The leader was of course Cyclops and the loner was obviously Logan. Nice job!

-SkyRogue

WOW! that was a good story ]

That was powerful! It was high time someone wrote an angsty crazed piece like that.