Reviews for Walls
Terra1984 chapter 1 . 11/28/2007
I liked it
Mary Rose chapter 1 . 10/25/2007
I liked this.
Dr. Cameron chapter 1 . 10/25/2007
Wow, that was really well done. You hit her character spot on, and I loved that you took it a step further than what we already know (like the part about splashing in the puddles because she hadn't allowed herself to grow up). The only thing I would suggest for next time would be proofreading a little more carefully.
Henna Gamgee chapter 1 . 10/22/2007
Love it! I'm fascinated by this post-shooting situation on the show, and I think you've done a great job of showing how Lilly is probably feeling.
hime's-unmentionables chapter 1 . 10/20/2007
A great second part to the councilling oneshots, I especially loved the last line.

Grammar is good as usual, as is characterization. I'm liking that you're keeping Lily as she should be, but I'm guessing she may break down in the end. ;)

My only qualm was your paragraph situating. That first big block could be broken into three seperate paragraphs, and several other blocks could be spaced out.

Other than that, well done. _