Reviews for What Evil Lurks in the Heart of Man
PTBvisiongrrl chapter 7 . 8/19/2015
Please continue!
chuck-is-god chapter 7 . 10/5/2014
It was rather good, but it feels unfinished to me. It was clear the brothers will eventually make nice, but they didn't actually do so in this story.

This was such a good story because it gracefully handled really horrible topics; it was not too descriptive, and yet it was possible to grasp the pain they went through. Will be incorporating that technique into some of my fics!
ucat42 chapter 7 . 6/9/2011
Please, please, please finish this story!
xXxShiniXKazexXx chapter 7 . 8/24/2010
Brilliant, are you ever going to continue?
vengeance71 chapter 7 . 8/22/2009
I orginally read this story on Supernaturalville. I have been waiting for an update for a long time. I now have it set up on my alerts. I have read and re-read this story; hoping that you will continue.
EmptySpaces11 chapter 4 . 11/20/2008
Everything Dean does he does for love, but you couldn’t understand that. You have no concept of what love is. You’re the one who’s twisted, warped.

That was perfect.

I don't like John Winchester as a father. I probably don't understand his line of though but I don't accept what he did to his sons in many ways.

There are many ways to hurt a human being and Dean suffered all, I guess.

EmptySpaces11 chapter 3 . 11/20/2008
You know, the protective mode of Dean is very dangerous to himself. I know that as a big brother, Dean must to protect his little brother but it's a kind of self destruction, don't you agree?

You did a great job writing words and didn't tell all the story of him. To read the subtexts is an experience very rich because we can ever think about many other shades.

This story is a really really good story.

Lots of stars to you.

EmptySpaces11 chapter 2 . 11/20/2008
Where did you find the name Leviatan?

Did you do some kind of research?

It's very interesting how you put Sam in front of the demon. I really loved it.


See you.

EmptySpaces11 chapter 1 . 9/23/2008

For sure Dean was that man... Lust is his first sin, one ot them. This fic is truly, really truly dark. Demon lies a lot but think wath they showed in that show... You know... I really think your mind got it - Dean for suer did a lot of things...

I don't like the father that John Winchester represent. He isn't or wan't a father to the boys specially for Sam. Dean was Sam's father.

I like the way you write. For sure this is the more dark fic I had ever read. And I hope you update soon. I would like to write a review in each chapter. If I can feel able to do it - because I don't really speak English very well, I think you could misunderstand me - I will.

So... I really like the way you describe the pain in those boys. They are a big can of pain. I love the way you built Sam's character here. This is the real Sam - waiting always for more, question a lot, hoping a lot, but never really showing what he really feel because I feel all the apologizes a lie, not true, or not really true.

Well, I hope you update soon. I am expecting the chapter number eight. I have read the fic almost I have time. And I do continue thinking about what you write - Dean's life was terrible. To a child to alone is the worst thing. Really.

Well, I wrote a lot, I know... Don't think I will not try to reveiw the other chapters...

Bye for now.

dion-fortune chapter 7 . 9/7/2008
wow this story is great! it totally got to me :D I think you did a great job on details. I love hurt dean-physically or emotionaly and poor Sammy :D it was really well written :D I love it
Dark Days chapter 7 . 8/29/2008
God, this is amazing... but so very painful. Anxiously awaiting next update.
Ghostwriter chapter 7 . 8/26/2008
Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.
annacat chapter 7 . 8/22/2008
Still loving this - but now that they're all broken, you have to fix it. Please?

p.s. Love Dean's last line about the cross dressing (hee).
Naed chapter 7 . 8/21/2008
Fantastic story! :) Looking forward to next chapter. :)
Vee-sama chapter 7 . 7/8/2008
Awesome Awesome story, simply love it. I've always been a fan of your work, this time your work is pretty different, but as always you're still able to get me completely hooked on every word! Update soon please!
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