|Reviews for The Mirror of Erised|
| Catnipob chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
Excellently written... very sad though. but as the Ghost of (Muppet) Christmas past would say "These are the shadows of the past. That they are what they are, do not blame me."
| DramaPoette chapter 1 . 10/22/2007
Hey! Well lets see here...It was pretty good, decent, had an original concept, was decently written...but you could have been more detailed. Everything's fine, but you just need to fine-tune your writing. Don't just post the first draft, rather, look over it and fix any mistakes and elaborate on parts that you feel you didn't convey quite right. Stop and think "What emotion or idea do I want to get across, and do I feel that I did?" A very good start, just rework it.
| Marauder's Mad chapter 1 . 10/22/2007
A very good idea, and well written ! I liked it !
| Dodger Gilmore chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
After figuring out the news, I went looking for fics like this. Before this they've really been lacking in quality though, and I'd almost given up hope. But this, this is exactly what I wanted. A simple moment like this one, completely canon, just from a different POV. Also nicely written. Really good job!
| Turin resurrected chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
| BandGeek58407 chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
wow...that was really good. and that was an understatement. it was AWESOME! woo!
mcgonagallxdumbledore may be nonsense now of course...but who's to say she didn't love him? (mwahaha)
great fic! _
| Obelisk of Light chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
I heard the news of Dumbledore's sexuality yesterday and searched for ADGG fics. I'm glad I found yours - it's beautifully written and touching. Dumbledore wished to see his sister and saw himself with his enemy instead. I'm starting to ship the both of them, though. :)
| invader-squeee chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
Aww. I was actually quite sad reading this. Poor Dumbledore D:
Beautifully written story, I really enjoyed it. Excellent job!
| as the stars watch me descend chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
*laughs* Ever since the night after the Deathly Hallows came out, I've subconsciously known that Dumbledore loved Grindelwald... I had a dream about those two in a relationship the night after I finished reading it the Deathly Hallows... XD My subconscious is clearly smarter and more perceptive than I am.
| Karaii chapter 1 . 10/20/2007
| Gueneviere chapter 1 . 10/20/2007
Wow. It does make more sense if you see it this way.
| icefire-lioness chapter 1 . 10/20/2007
That, my friend, was wonderful. Written very, very well, and I think you captured Dumbledore's pain as he must have felt it beautifully.
Gorgeous, and TRULY inspired.
I actually only heard the wonderful news about Dumbles today, but I was going to write something along the lines of this already ;)
Looks like you beat me to the punch though, eh?
probably a good thing, considering my talent (or lack thereof) for writing.
| A. Dagger chapter 1 . 10/20/2007
Ah, the Dumbledore/Grindewald fanfic has started already...
Nicely written, liked the descriptions very much.
| Avindara Nirvene chapter 1 . 10/20/2007
Lovely, fits very well. But I recall JKR saying in an interview that he'd be seeing his family, whole and smiling there.
But it still fits so well... :)
| AmericanGryffindor chapter 1 . 10/20/2007
Omg that made me lol
I was laughing when I heard about Dumbledore...not that I'm surprised...I always wondered why he never had a wife.