|Reviews for Little Miss Seductress|
| Gia chapter 20 . 2/7
Why did you stop? It's amazing I couldn't stop reading
| Densita chapter 20 . 1/10
I like your fanfic...
I hope I know the next chapter untill the last chapter...
So sad to know you stop writing fanfic...
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/14/2013
Are u writing this story in past or present ? Cause first ur saying 'is' then 'was'. Sorry, it just pisses me off when that happens
| Xxxxxkatherinexxxxxx chapter 20 . 8/16/2013
I couldn't find the fucking riz
| Lisa chapter 20 . 7/22/2013
Sorry found it
| Liz chapter 20 . 7/22/2013
Umm I can't find the author, I wrote the name on the search thing but I can't find the author, can u help me?
| Grace chapter 20 . 7/4/2013
I really enjoyed your story. You stick to the characters personality really well. Not a lot of people can do that but you can! I also really loved how you really let me into the mind of each and every character. You are an amazing writer. I'm bumbed out that you didn't finish this because I would prefer you write it, over anyone else. I think if you were very dedicated to this story (which I'm sure u still are) then (I think) you could make this in to a very succesful book. You would of course have the change the characters name, but that won't matter! Your transitioning from one couple to another couldn't be any clearer. It may be a pain in the butt, but you would have to focus a bit more on the other couples relationships. And when you complete that your story will be AMAZING! And I would defientialy but and read it.
A lot of people have been on your about your grammar. You do have a few mistakes, but don't worry! Everyone makes a mistakes in their writings, and it is HARD to get your grammar perfect. But the fact they comment about it also means they care and know your doing great and want to encourage you!
And a lot of things other people say is they hate sasuke's personality. Personally I really like it (I don't hate sasuke). Every story needs a person people don't really like. It's good! Because during the story the readers are going to realize he has changed. And at the end of the story the main character (or one of them) will change throughout the story. And that's what you did, which make the story very perfessional.
(I know...I'm still rambling on...)
The way you incorporated kiarin (or however you spell her name), kiba, and sai into this story was genius! And it fit their personalities great too (especially kiarin)! Good job!
I really enjoyed your story. I hope you continue it (and are reading this message)! I can't wait to read another one of your stories ( or maybe this story taken to the next level?). I LOVE your story!
Grace W. ;)!
| stuckinwonderland420 chapter 2 . 2/19/2013
If you were ever to edit this, I would like Hinata more in-character please!
| stuckinwonderland420 chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
I am very excited to read this story! For the lingest time I didn't want to read it because of the title, but this is really good! And it's only the prologue! The characters are SURPRISINGLY almost, 100%, genuinely in-character, which is incredibly hard to do with AU stories. I'm looking forward to next chapter!
| Guest chapter 17 . 2/2/2013
Oh my, Ino, you go GURRRRRLLLL!
| MusicAngel13 chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
Cool but really this sounds like boys vs girls who's stronger
| angellyx13 chapter 20 . 1/2/2013
I like your plot idea but I don't like how you wrote most of the story. Sasuke is a bastard who thinks everyone has to do what he says. He doesn't deserve Sakura. And why is Sakura the one always giving into Sasuke's demands? That doesn't seem fair. Sakura says she was forced to date and get engaged with Sasuke but she didn't even try to do anything about it. Your story is pretty sexist even though I'm pretty sure that wasn't you intention.
| Topaz Princess chapter 19 . 1/2/2012
This was a really gate High School fic. I really hoped they would look for a compromise in power rather than total control so as not to nullify the plan and stay with the guys they have to obviously fallen wayyy hard for
| berryboom chapter 19 . 10/30/2011
This story is awesome, but I'm tired enough to skip reviewing each chapter...So, this story is the best high-school-playgirl fic ever! Just improve your grammar, will you? It gives me goosebumps. lol
| Guest chapter 10 . 7/12/2011
I hate how sasuke attitude. The way those type of people act irritates me