Reviews for A New Life
Astromormy chapter 33 . 4/17
HOT DAMN! This story was beyond amazing. I can't say I'm happy Naruto killed himself, but I can see why you did it like that, and you pulled it off stupendously. Everything about this story was awesome, from the character development, to the plot, all the way to the conclusion. The only complaint I have to add is that you didn't really close out the Team Trauma arc as they still seem to be around, despite Naruto destroying a major base and killing their leader. Of course, this is mostly inferred, but it's just to point out that you could have had Naruto finish off Team Trauma permanently instead of just wounding them.

It'd have also been interesting to see if Naruto managed to rebuild any kind of relationship with Macavity after her betrayal. The same with Moan seeing as she was just an interesting character that had only been hinted at beforehand.
2Lazy2Login chapter 33 . 3/1
Liked the story, not the ending. That's why I won't leave a huge review like I always do.
calypso.felicity chapter 1 . 12/29/2017
I really really really really want a continuation of this story
brokenstrings001 chapter 1 . 11/27/2017
Treat pokegirl like a girl and shock her into
Ridiculous naming unrelated to
Out of Character .
mdhunter111 chapter 33 . 11/13/2017
Mdhunter here. What a great fanfic! Great job! Love how it all fit together. Hopefully Naruto will eventually return to his girls someday. Anyways, thank you for writing such an incredible story, and have a great week. :)
Guest chapter 33 . 7/7/2017
Definitely not worth the time you put into it.
Train Heartnett chapter 33 . 5/29/2017
Awesome !
Epic !
me want sequel chapter 33 . 4/17/2017
black pikachu ,hmm OK interesting go for it man any sequel to this story is greatly appreciated and wanted. So yeah go for it and post the story name and your name author dude..
ryanwilbert622 chapter 33 . 4/10/2017
Please update the story. It was such an awesome story plus the whole filler stuff and all. Please update. Please update. please update please update... Again please update.
Guest chapter 33 . 3/2/2017
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DarthMEOWS chapter 10 . 3/2/2017
i've been enjoying your story alot but i looked up something that you had stated earlier about frostwyrms... THEY DO NOT EVOLVE INTO ANYTHING! a leviathaness has no known evolution, either to or from. they just are... aside from that its a well written story and I have been enjoying it alot. keep up the good work
Kuroyukie chapter 33 . 2/21/2017
ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! GOOD JOB
black pikachu chapter 24 . 1/17/2017
Another life
I DO NOT OWN POKEGIRLS,NARATO OR A NEW LIFE. ALL CREDITS GO TO THE ORIGINAL OWNERS
A/N:
Hi guys this is my version of a continuation of the wondafull fan fic A New Life by infernal maelstrom. He is the one who inspired my to make another life. I will not claim to be as good as infernal but like it's predasesor it will not contain any lemons so get all your frustration out in the reviews now go on I'll wait...ok are you back? Good now with out further ado here is the unofficial sequel to ANL: another life

It has been forty three years since the masked tamer disappeared. And his pokegirls still continue to live out there lives as they had been pryer to ther tamers disappearance, how ever this was about to change.
Kidara was walking along the beach when she spotted a strange lump floating a little bit up the shore. She ran over to it but over shot a bit not being used to tuning fast as she had not practised in a while. Apon futher inspection
g chapter 24 . 1/17/2017
Part 2
Kidara Noticed a familiar mop of unruly bloind hair. Geting excited she picked up the lump and brought it in to the house that narato had given the girls all those long years ago. Setting down the lump on the chouch kadra started cleaning away the gunk that srounded the person. As she dug kadra got more and more exsited in till she uncoved who was in the ball of mud to her surprise she found a boy wearing a bright orange jumpsuit. Suddenly the boy opened his eyes jumped up and screamed "what the hell is that" having seen kidara " and where is jriya sensai" "I was training with him just now" " is that really the last thing you remember Naruto" kidara said a little dejectedly "what do you mean last thing I remember and how do you know my name" the newly identified Naruto half yelled. Kidara sighed and with nothing left to do she got up and went to the kitchen "hey where are you going" naruto half yelled again. Kidara knowing naruto would listen to reason with food in him set about making
h chapter 24 . 1/17/2017
Part 3
His favorite dish: ramen. Which she had long since masted making in case naruto ever came back. "Well I got my wish" she said to her self "though not how we wanted him I suppose". Naruto tired of being ingnored started to get bored and as we all know a bored naruto is a dangerous one. Seeing that this "thing" that had apparently kidnap him. He was going to try and get up to a little mischief. But right at that second the door burst open and another one of those creatures came flying through those this time it had wings and was slightly pale blue. "Were is he" Ryai yelled (for that was who had burst through the door). Naruto Sensing that he was in deep s*** here decided that would be best to run however Before he could even make it two steps he was thust into a big hug by Ryai. The others started shuffling into the house behind her. Vinslet the vampire master of illusions, kireina master of the sword and the current leader of the flying Heaven honorable sword style school, yuffie the
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