Reviews for A New Life
Guest chapter 33 . 7/7
Definitely not worth the time you put into it.
Train Heartnett chapter 33 . 5/29
Awesome !
Epic !
me want sequel chapter 33 . 4/17
black pikachu ,hmm OK interesting go for it man any sequel to this story is greatly appreciated and wanted. So yeah go for it and post the story name and your name author dude..
ryanwilbert622 chapter 33 . 4/10
Please update the story. It was such an awesome story plus the whole filler stuff and all. Please update. Please update. please update please update... Again please update.
Guest chapter 33 . 3/2
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DarthMEOWS chapter 10 . 3/2
i've been enjoying your story alot but i looked up something that you had stated earlier about frostwyrms... THEY DO NOT EVOLVE INTO ANYTHING! a leviathaness has no known evolution, either to or from. they just are... aside from that its a well written story and I have been enjoying it alot. keep up the good work
Kuroyukie chapter 33 . 2/21
ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! GOOD JOB
black pikachu chapter 24 . 1/17
Another life
I DO NOT OWN POKEGIRLS,NARATO OR A NEW LIFE. ALL CREDITS GO TO THE ORIGINAL OWNERS
A/N:
Hi guys this is my version of a continuation of the wondafull fan fic A New Life by infernal maelstrom. He is the one who inspired my to make another life. I will not claim to be as good as infernal but like it's predasesor it will not contain any lemons so get all your frustration out in the reviews now go on I'll wait...ok are you back? Good now with out further ado here is the unofficial sequel to ANL: another life

It has been forty three years since the masked tamer disappeared. And his pokegirls still continue to live out there lives as they had been pryer to ther tamers disappearance, how ever this was about to change.
Kidara was walking along the beach when she spotted a strange lump floating a little bit up the shore. She ran over to it but over shot a bit not being used to tuning fast as she had not practised in a while. Apon futher inspection
g chapter 24 . 1/17
Part 2
Kidara Noticed a familiar mop of unruly bloind hair. Geting excited she picked up the lump and brought it in to the house that narato had given the girls all those long years ago. Setting down the lump on the chouch kadra started cleaning away the gunk that srounded the person. As she dug kadra got more and more exsited in till she uncoved who was in the ball of mud to her surprise she found a boy wearing a bright orange jumpsuit. Suddenly the boy opened his eyes jumped up and screamed "what the hell is that" having seen kidara " and where is jriya sensai" "I was training with him just now" " is that really the last thing you remember Naruto" kidara said a little dejectedly "what do you mean last thing I remember and how do you know my name" the newly identified Naruto half yelled. Kidara sighed and with nothing left to do she got up and went to the kitchen "hey where are you going" naruto half yelled again. Kidara knowing naruto would listen to reason with food in him set about making
h chapter 24 . 1/17
Part 3
His favorite dish: ramen. Which she had long since masted making in case naruto ever came back. "Well I got my wish" she said to her self "though not how we wanted him I suppose". Naruto tired of being ingnored started to get bored and as we all know a bored naruto is a dangerous one. Seeing that this "thing" that had apparently kidnap him. He was going to try and get up to a little mischief. But right at that second the door burst open and another one of those creatures came flying through those this time it had wings and was slightly pale blue. "Were is he" Ryai yelled (for that was who had burst through the door). Naruto Sensing that he was in deep s*** here decided that would be best to run however Before he could even make it two steps he was thust into a big hug by Ryai. The others started shuffling into the house behind her. Vinslet the vampire master of illusions, kireina master of the sword and the current leader of the flying Heaven honorable sword style school, yuffie the
Guest chapter 24 . 1/17
Part 4
Outgoing master of ninjusu otherwise know is the Mistress of BOOM and current leader of the Naruto no ninjusu school and finally fumiko the shrine Oracle And current leader of the Naruto Uzumaki faith. Ryai having been done with her hug held out naruto for all to see. When she got a good look at Naruto Ryai noticed the bright orange jumpsuit that he was currently wearing and realise that this was the 14 year old version of the Naruto that she loved. Setting him Down gently, she also noticed the stream of blood running out of his nose and the stupid look on his face. Realising that she probably had just overloaded Naruto's adolescent brain by pressing him up against her breast. Ryai took a moment to compose her self before she set naruto down on the sofa where he promptly collapsed from overload.
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so what do you guys think was it good shod I continue please let me know and ill make a official version on my real account until then bye bye now.
black pikachu chapter 25 . 1/17
Huh the double punch...wow reference of every narato and sasuke that you missed nice
ddentler21 chapter 33 . 1/16
Awesome story, really enjoyed your work
Astroman1000 chapter 1 . 1/10
Yo straight up this is the first chapter and the story seems awesome. Also it's very long and any opinions or ideas I have have probably have no chance of getting integrated but after seeing(reading) Naruto beat up Rylai himself I just wanna see that happen again. After thinking on it it might be seen as neglect to whatever girls he catches knowing Naruto he would personally train he girls anyway. It would be too funny seeing Naruto just walk into the he elite four and them going "bring out your first girl!" And Naruto says " Naw I got this" and then they fighting and Naruto absolutely wrecks shit. Haaaaaaaaa...
Anyway excited for the rest if I enjoyed this first chapter so much til then...
darkthanatos chapter 33 . 1/6
I couldn't think of a nicer and more fitting ending to this story I hope that you would consider doing a small "sequel" where he does come back
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