Reviews for A New Life
jiwilson97 chapter 33 . 6/8
Awesome story it’s very fun to read though I gotta ask do u plan on making a second season to this story?
Lord of Cinders chapter 1 . 5/27
why is this not in the crossover section
Guest chapter 33 . 5/20
Y el epilogo
Loyal Fan chapter 33 . 3/11
Are you dead?
Xzyxx chapter 1 . 1/6
That was beautiful. It was engaging all the way through despite a few errors here and there. The story was well thought through but it left me with a few questions. They're not mind boggling so I'll not bother you with them but I hope you keep writing. The end is bittersweet and I hope he finds his way back. Thank you for the wonderful fic. :)
KitsuneDxD chapter 1 . 11/29/2018
this fic is one of the best I ever read
Mehehe chapter 1 . 11/27/2018
First chapter, info dump. Lots of tell no show. Can live with that it's setting the scene.
Then while prepping and launching a city killing attack(it tells us this) Naruto says "Cease this foolishness Sasuke!" I think alright this is just stupid and exit out.
Then I start thinking. The author has Naruto speaking so out of character while firing a city killing attack against a target close enough to hear him speak during an attack against his home town
Lol this story just went full retard. Never go full retard. I am going to finish reading this chapter to see if Naruto is really stupid enough to kill himself and destroy the town he is defending with the equivalent of a tactical nuke.
Kurama chapter 33 . 7/26/2018
Please bring out a part two.
Jixray chapter 22 . 7/23/2018
Vinslet is just basically Shikamaru. How am I just now noticing it?
XXX777 chapter 22 . 7/16/2018
Nice OC Pokegirls the Shrine Oracle and Leviathan. Very good work.
Astromormy chapter 33 . 4/17/2018
HOT DAMN! This story was beyond amazing. I can't say I'm happy Naruto killed himself, but I can see why you did it like that, and you pulled it off stupendously. Everything about this story was awesome, from the character development, to the plot, all the way to the conclusion. The only complaint I have to add is that you didn't really close out the Team Trauma arc as they still seem to be around, despite Naruto destroying a major base and killing their leader. Of course, this is mostly inferred, but it's just to point out that you could have had Naruto finish off Team Trauma permanently instead of just wounding them.

It'd have also been interesting to see if Naruto managed to rebuild any kind of relationship with Macavity after her betrayal. The same with Moan seeing as she was just an interesting character that had only been hinted at beforehand.
2Lazy2Login chapter 33 . 3/1/2018
Liked the story, not the ending. That's why I won't leave a huge review like I always do.
calypso.felicity chapter 1 . 12/29/2017
I really really really really want a continuation of this story
brokenstrings001 chapter 1 . 11/27/2017
Treat pokegirl like a girl and shock her into
Ridiculous naming unrelated to
Out of Character .
mdhunter111 chapter 33 . 11/13/2017
Mdhunter here. What a great fanfic! Great job! Love how it all fit together. Hopefully Naruto will eventually return to his girls someday. Anyways, thank you for writing such an incredible story, and have a great week. :)
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