Reviews for Erupting Flames
mouse chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
I really enjoyed your story, but how tragic. It calls to mind that old saying, "Pride goeth before the fall", and yes, horses can have gray eyes. They're called glass-eyed & wall-eyed.

Thanks!
Santorsola chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
Very good. I love how Kanade is the storyteller, quite sad, but really interesting.

Keep writing!
soheil solitarius chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
Nice! I like how its got the 'story- teller' theme to it.
Silent Scribe chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
I love how your fics have such a "story-teller" feel to them! This was well written and, yeah, no one mentions Entei that much (how sad).

Btw, horses can have sleet gray eyes. It's beautiful, but rare.
INUGIRL chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
AMAZING!BY THE WAY WHO WERE THE TWO ELDEST?WAS IT ASAGI,ROKU,DAI,MOEGI,OR SHION?TELL ME!MAKE A ANOTHER STORY!