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DarkRoseRay chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
IOTR chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
Good poem.

But wrong section.

So stop picking random categories.

It pisses people off (like me)
Larsie chapter 1 . 3/8/2008
Deep poem, pretty good, but again it's disrespectful and annoying to people who want stories actually about the category they're searching under. Don't just put things in a random category- you can get banned or have your story removed easily. If you just take it out of this category, the negative comments would stop.
Diana26.5 chapter 1 . 1/13/2008
Kay, I'll admitt it's a good poem, but please take it out of a genre it doesn't belong in!

No offense, but to me that's kinda disrespect to the genre itself!
EMarie55Plus chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
Not bad, but may I offer a piece of free advice? There is

a category specifically for this type of writing, and you

should only select a category that ACTUALLY has to do with

your work. This will certainly save you from getting negative

naonaonao chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
I agree, very well-written and extremely deep. Although you are an exceptional writer, try deviantART or fictinpress, and not clicking on a category to which you have no idea about. Please stop choosing random categories for your poetry.
Halo-Maker chapter 1 . 10/22/2007
that poem is very very deep... i hope to see more work from you