Reviews for Starry Night
WHAT THE FUCK chapter 1 . 4/19
... What the fuuuu
Redmoe chapter 1 . 4/10
Great
Anonymous chapter 1 . 1/24
Erotic
booma waing chapter 1 . 1/20
Good!
Savanna Gabriel chapter 1 . 1/19
Cool
arcanist chapter 1 . 10/20/2016
It's really good and nice, but the "meeting at McDonalds part"...
ItsAMe123 chapter 1 . 10/18/2016
mc donalds really?
Solidchief Link chapter 1 . 1/12/2016
I thought it was a brilliant story of romance. Less of a birthday present because he TOOK her virginity instead of GIVING her it. And one thing I do not reccomend in writing lemon is describing male pubes. None of this subtracts from it though and it is good to see different things.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/1/2015
Why
Guest chapter 1 . 6/10/2015
Shout out to McDonalds.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/27/2015
Well its good but can you make one with them in the original LOZ universe
P-90 chapter 1 . 10/28/2014
This.
Was.
...
...
Good.
...
*Pulls out a bottle of pills, unscews the cap and takes a pill*
Goodbye
...
*Loses balance and falls over awkwardly*
[THUMP]
Chase chapter 1 . 10/4/2014
It was awsome
mighle chapter 1 . 7/31/2014
Holly shit dude that was AWSOME!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/22/2014
thats a birthday present to remember :3
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