|Reviews for Intervention|
| Gianna di Fiori chapter 1 . 6/15
This was a very fun read! It was suspenseful in its blow by blow description of the "arrest" and its slow, but increasingly humorous, build-up to the delivery and "sentencing" of the prisoner. One of my favorites that I go back and reread now and then.
| rerichardson4 chapter 1 . 3/30
A gem of a story! It made me laugh and I loved the idea of the water pistols.
| Cutter12 chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
Oooh, that was very brave what those agents, and Charlie, did. :)
This story was filled with a lot of fun stuff to keep the laughter going throughout reading the whole thing. :D
| EmilyChelidon chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
Awesome. Super cute _
| Cissyaliza chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
I see I didn't reviewed to this story. I like very much also when you write humour.
| fighttowin1 chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
I simply love this fiction...for when I'm in the mood for some fun! I had forgotten what this one was about..so I read it, I loved how you kept the reader pretty sure..but not positive about what was going on. That was a pretty dangerous plan...but it all worked out...and I got a good laugh at the end when they started the water gun fight and Charlie shot Alan with the water instead of Don. I could hear it play out as I was reading it...was perfectly written, and full of fun. Thank you so much for having taken the time to write this and to share it with us. I love your stories so much that I find myself reading them often. When I find one that I didn't review the first time I read it, I'm trying to do so now. :-)
Thanks again! Loved it...and ALL of your stories!
| Miss Enthusiasimal chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
Oh My Flying Geese that was funny! LOL! No better than Lol LMAO! (Laugh my ass off)
| epalladino chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
Hilarious. That was really well written. It seemed so real at first. I loved the judge's 'punishment'.
| Tatsumaki-sama chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
Oh man, that was hilarious! I loved how Don was "guilty" and the rest of them were taking him to court. I could definitely picture them doing this with the toy guns and the handcuffs, just for the fun of it. There were so many lines that had me cracked up.
/“Oh, come on. This is too much.” The prisoner commented. “You’re taking me in my own car?”
“Budget cutbacks.” Megan replied./
/“This is illegal.”
“Tell it to the judge.”
“I want my lawyer.”/
/“I know this judge. He’s biased.”/
/ “You’ve already found me guilty.” The prisoner said, shoulders slumping slightly.
“Damn straight.” The judge conceded./
/The prisoner lifted his chin, squared his shoulders and glared defiantly at the judge. “Fine. So what’s my punishment?”
“Rib-eye followed by ice-cream.”/
All of these and more were just too good. It must have been hard for them to keep a straight face while doing this.
| Cairis Rin chapter 1 . 11/30/2007
That was very cute! Thanks for putting a grin on my face. :D
| shaolingrrl chapter 1 . 10/23/2007
Dang, this is cute. The contrast between the "just the facts" recounting and the actual events is great. Plus the image of Charlie in a vest... :-)
| Synbou chapter 1 . 10/23/2007
That was a great story! There are so much I liked about it - Like Colby worry that the "Prisoner" could really create problems for them, Don's comment about the judge being biais, them taking him in his own car, Don's quick reflexes, etc.
| Las Vegas Navarro chapter 1 . 10/22/2007
Job well done. Believable tactical raid, right down to the ribeye and ice cream. I love little shots like this that make the characters more vibrant. Bravo!
| celadon chapter 1 . 10/22/2007
LOL! You did it! This was great - just hilarious!
| Stellarsiren chapter 1 . 10/22/2007
Hehe! Too cute:) Couldn't exactly figure out why it was Don being "arrested." Shoulda known it was on the charge of "Being a Work-aholic"...with missed obligations;) Lovely!