|Reviews for Admissions|
| Deep in the Night chapter 1 . 5/5
Ooh la la! A very intriguing use of 2nd person. I didn't realize one could do that without a reader X *character* sort of thing.
Very nice, indeed!
| Natalie chapter 1 . 2/7/2016
That's really painful stuff, unrequited love. Hopefully everyone who has ever felt oh also got to have love in a more wonderful way. I feel bad for Snape and Lily. It's not a good situation. I was thinking it was Ron, but now I'm laundering if it was Harry. Since the story paralleled Snape/Lily. Thank you for sharing.
| Helen Roston chapter 1 . 12/24/2012
I wish he had been loved and hopefully in your story he does since it is an implied pairing. Good job showing the angst of the characters.
| julia chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
*5h later*! so cuuuute! love it!
| BadGirlgoesworse chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
| aimoon chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
| GreenEyedRedHead1994 chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
I was all sad because of this fic...then i read the ending! ROTFL! "Damn you" HA!
| NoahIrene chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
| Valmarien chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
Very bittersweet. I like the fact that you wrote it in the first person like he's addressing her, as well. It makes it more immediate and moving.
| Pharies chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
I love getting into his head. It's always an interesting kind of thing. It's fun to see what people come up with. Hehehe
| Seom chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
that was lovely! *tear*
| Eyes-Wide-Open1989 chapter 1 . 10/27/2006
OMG that was fabulous! I swear!
| Rickmanlover24601 chapter 1 . 7/23/2005
Aw. Sev needs her so badly... And I need your marvelous stories. I'm going away for a week with no internet and I will miss reading your beautiful collection of works each night before bed. *Sniff* At least they'll be there when I get back. He he. Byee!
| The Dark Insomniac chapter 1 . 5/22/2005
I really like this one a LOT! I love his feelings and memories! So awesome! _
Blessed be and Luv,
*~*The Dark Insomniac*~*
"In a fleshy tomb, I am buried above ground."
"Dead men tell no tales unless it's in Forensics."
"My Karma ran over your Dogma."
| BabyRuth chapter 1 . 3/18/2005
are you going to it harry she broke up with.i hope it ws continue this story