Reviews for Trap chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
bahaha very funny- the intro was very formal and summary-like though. You could try to lead into the humor with a more natural beginning. Hilarious though!
sti chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
I absolutely adore this story! Cant stop laughig) ) ) ) ) )
streaks273 chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
LOL nice and realistic
tripping over isolines.x chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
hilarious!'s even funnier that Sirius would be carrying around a condom in his pocket :) chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
thats funny so nice to know what sirius black carries around in his pockets...awkward anyways brilliant job


live well smile lots update often
grrl77 chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
oh my goodness. this is hilarious. i really mean it, it made me seriously laugh out loud. your a very good writer and i love your cleverness in this story.
Il'Diko chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
:D Oh God, I'm in hysterics! A good one! Loved Sirius here..
Amiiix3 chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
Haha, boy would that be embarrassing.
Valmarien chapter 1 . 11/13/2007
Oh no. Poor, poor guy... I'm still laughing _
K. East chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
ihearttheo.c chapter 1 . 10/26/2007
Oh! I laughed all the way through this! I told my friends about it and they thought it was hilarious too.
lotzaluv chapter 1 . 10/26/2007
AMAZING...pure's a wonder that Lily said anything when James said "contraception", but then the story wouldn't be so f'ing funny!

Daisy Blue chapter 1 . 10/24/2007
Oh I don't think I've laughed that much in a while, in between cringing in embarrassment for Lily - and James too now you mention it.

The ending was fantastic! I loved it. I'm still giggling hopelessly... :D
Nadiabb786 chapter 1 . 10/24/2007
Hilarious story. Excellent idea and well-written.
margentbutter chapter 1 . 10/24/2007
Excellent! That made me giggle so much.

You're a great writer, you could write a great history of the Marauders

You know, something to work on if you're bored :D haha.
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