Powerful!

You are one of my favourite Labyrinth authors! Another gorgeous story!

Lovely. And not full of angst, like too many in this genre. Thanks!

I usually shy away from grandiose prose, but yours manages to sound beautiful without becoming purple. I honestly don't know how to describe the difference between the two other than skill. I usually write comedy because this style of poetic prose always eludes me. I wish I understood it more. If you've written anything original I'd love to read that too.

Awesome! What power you possess, esteemed author, to so consistently transport me into the marvellous worlds of your imagination. Thank you again for the experience.

I reread this today, and it is still an amazing post Labyrinth timeline story. Wonderful idea. Very well written.

Absolutely exquisite and evocative imagery, you are truly a master Wordsmith. (I also loved the little references to Anne of Green Gables and Beauty and the Beast)
'Til next time :)

im fine im not crying you're crying

What a beautiful, luscious tale.

A lick of pleasure for every sense.

Thank you so much.

I can't recall how many years have passed since I read this, but I've kept it on a list to come back to after some time, so that I could properly review and favorite it later. While I remember why I enjoyed your tale and found it so interesting, the specific details are lost on me - but perhaps I might remember them further, the next time I feel inclined to read it again (as I surely will)...It must have been full of intrigue indeed for me to store it away with choice others, now to be looked upon once again.
So, thank you for sharing your words and I wish you all the best ~

Ah this was surprisingly well written. I loved the inner monologue :) thank you for sharing your talent!

There are words enough to describe how this story made me feel. You describe an artist anguish so perfectly. To entwine that into the story of sarah and jareth so perfectly... I only wish there was more to read..

Again, bravo. You are a wonderful writer.

This was simply awesome. Insanely, incredibly awesome. What I loved most of the all was the description? It was hot. Insanely hot all without making it seem like it was a total tongue battle. You did a great job with this story

Haha love the Beauty and the beast reference. Your writing is like reading a free verse poem. It has a dreamy feel to it. Love it!