Reviews for Saiken: The Last Avatar
Wysteria Fox chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
Oh wow I'm already hooked. You have to keep writing this. :D It has a lot of potential, because seeing as there aren't anymore airbenders for the cycle to continue. I can see you'r angle perfectly. :3 Don't worry about those other reviewers- Roku didn't say that the only way for the cycle to be broken is for the Avatar to be killed in the avatar state, and I can see how you're fast forewarding past the other avatars before the 'fire' again.

Story Weaver1 chapter 1 . 10/23/2007
This sounds good and all but, Avatar Roku said the only way for the Avatar to die forever was if an Avatar was killed in the Avatar State. That little plot hole undermines the whole fic
comptine chapter 1 . 10/23/2007
this is good but you lack an Earthbending teacher...

I'd be happy to help with character making...
Azatoth chapter 1 . 10/23/2007
Looks interesting, but you are aware, that the Avatar after Aang would be a Waterbender yes? They follow the way the books are listed, Water, Earth (Kioshi), Fire (Ruko), Air (Aang), and then Water again.