Reviews for A Proud and Bitter Crown
GentleMidnightSnow chapter 35 . 6/30/2010
Wow! Yami died. Not what I was expecting, but then again, there's not much else you can end this story with. Oh, it's going to be coninued? Cool! I look forward to it.
GentleMidnightSnow chapter 33 . 6/30/2010
Oh no! Little Yugi has gone black. YAMI! So this is why the abused characters never want to get close to anyone else.
GentleMidnightSnow chapter 26 . 6/29/2010
Oh crap. Yami's finally become broken. No Yami! Ugh, I feel depressed. Very upset. Congratulations! (That wasn't sarcasm.)
GentleMidnightSnow chapter 21 . 6/28/2010
Yugi and Solomon's reactions to Yami's tragic past were good, but left a little bit to be desired. Just a little bit. It's just that you spent so long building such a tragic and angsty past for Yami, Yugi and Solomon probably should've reacted more dramatically. Just a thought.
GentleMidnightSnow chapter 18 . 6/28/2010
Yes! Finally, some LOVE! Not that any of story was not good writing, (in fact, I couldn't stop reading, and my parents had to literally drag me away to make me stop,) but I was becoming so filled with negative emotions (I can't help it, your writing was so good it made me feel the emotions in the story, and I cried at least once a chapter) that I was starting to become depressed.
GentleMidnightSnow chapter 19 . 6/28/2010
The part where Yami was yelled at made me cry. It's so sad! It makes you realize the extent of the damage done by his whole ordeal.
GentleMidnightSnow chapter 8 . 6/25/2010
That last part was true. I mean, we all laugh at Yami's insanely long speeches, and his fancy words. I did almost make fun of Yami's height. I wish he'd bee just a little bit taller.
Kiesha chapter 35 . 2/7/2010
But but but..! No... That's... Bad puzzle. Bad, bad puzzle. Though seeing as how the thing was made, it makes sense for it to be a little evil... But still!

On a completely unrelated note, I've fractured multiple ribs, and that last bit made them hurt again. Even though I cracked 'em YEARS ago.

(Incoherent review is incoherent.)
DazzlingMagicFox chapter 35 . 10/19/2009
yikes... I hope you won't end it here...
DazzlingMagicFox chapter 22 . 10/19/2009
o... I knew something like this was gonna happen... With the pharaoh's obvious hatred for his high priest's betrayal, no doubt he would go mad when he sees Kaiba who unfortunately looks like the high priest...
DazzlingMagicFox chapter 19 . 10/19/2009
bravo for another lovely chapter. You did a good job in picturing out Yami Yugi's 'humanness'... He is, most of the time, brave, confident, wise, and levelheaded... but he is human and humans have many emotions besides their usual demeanor. The Pharaoh's traumatized state was well described and I admire how you expressed him being a person...
DazzlingMagicFox chapter 17 . 10/19/2009
oh...poor pharaoh...

Though I must admit, your writing style is superb but I think the story is becoming hard to understand with too much symbolic and metaphoric words... try using some simple and direct words...

don't take it personally... it's just some constructive critic...
DazzlingMagicFox chapter 4 . 10/15/2009
beautifully written...
dragonlady222 chapter 35 . 8/6/2008
Such a sad chapter. I hope the Puzzle will leave Yugi alone now. It tortured yami so much, it was afraid of him and his power.
dragonlady222 chapter 34 . 8/6/2008
Poor Yami, Yugi is really being hateful. So unlike himself. I hope he wakes up from this soon and stops torturing Yami.
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