|Reviews for The Sweetest Things|
| Ciel the Hedgehog chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
Okay, I usually don't read Kingdom Hearts fanfics, but a friend of mine gave me a link to your stories...WOAH! I'm gonna' spend a lot of time reading your stuff!
Anyway, I heard you mention this on one of your other fics, so I checked it out...Axel with diabetes is something I'd never even think of, but it does make sense. Plus, the bit with Demyx trying to compose like Beethoven was cool too; I should go read 'The Day Music Died' now!
Keep up the good work, and expect more reviews from me in the future!
| crimson-obsidian-rose chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
Aw, diabetic!Axel, deaf!Demyx, what's next, anemic!Roxas? Sorry, that was me being sarcastic. Truthfully, I think it's a godd idea to have Axel suffer from something, just like Demyx, because it can deepen their friendship. And hey, at least there are ALOT of good sugar-free foods out there, so Axel can still have his "sweets".
As always, amazing plot and characters, thanks so much for writing (geez, why do I always end reviews the same way? Hope your not sick of my reviews yet, though, I'll probably be bakc on your page tomorrow!)
P.S.: I just wanted to tell you, you know a story is good when you can't forget it; I've been thinking about "The Day the Music Died" all day today, and last night as I was telling it to my sister I started sobbing and I almost lost it completely. So powerful... I wish I could double fav it!
| AkuDemyfan chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
Oh my! Demyx got once again beaten by Axel. I really don't like of that but other than Demyx get beating from Axel, it's great story!
| NinjaKana chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
If I was more sane, awake and not already in a melancholy state this evening- I probably would have cried. Actually. Definitely would have. Shit a lot of that happened to me . I hated on my mom and step dad for a LONG while. didn't take the violence route. Actually I don't think they knew... I got into the habit of lying then- well lying just about every day.
Um, yes I still love your fics, and you deserve much love w Vexy&Zexy
| Elephant Dude chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
Yeah. Damnit, you've got me hooked. I don't know how much crap I'll be able to write here but I'll try, eh? Gotta say at least something.
So... I liked it? The characters have stayed the same - well, not the same, obviously since Demy isn't depressed and gloomy anymore and Axel is angsty and angry, but they're... in-character. Very well written and I like the dialouges. Especially Xigbar's comment "Dude - put your ears back on so I can talk to you..." was pretty hilarious. It's also good to see that Demyx has gotten used to his hearing aids and stuff.
Yeah. Likey. Keep up the good work.
| Riku-Aura777 chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
Poor Axel. Thanks for adding in deaf Demyx, I like him so much more then Demyx from KH2. Please write another story about Axel dealing with his diabetes (hope I spelled that right).
| DemonSurfer chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
I...love your writing style. It gets the emotions across, peppered with hilarious snappy comebacks. And it's not just the sleep deprivation that's talking.
| FredandGeorgetwinsoftheC.O.C.A chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
You are just determined to make life hell for them all, aren't you? I can't figure out why, but it's so irresistable! I loved it! All of these little things are great!
| kitsuneluvuh chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
Wow... You really love giving the characters serious medical conditions, don't you? What's next, Marluxia developing a serious allergy to plants?
| Etoile de Nuit chapter 1 . 11/20/2007
Stunning, once again. Your talent for bringing about the most tragic situations for each person is astounding, although I must admit, I'm a sap for deaf Demyx. :P Please continue this mode of series?
| Shiba-X chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
Why are you apoligizing for the length?I LOVE long one shots!Love this could almost heck might as well make this into an ongoing .
| SharleaNorth chapter 1 . 10/28/2007
omg another great story! poor Axel, that would be hard for anyone to go through...
| WhiteWolfShaera chapter 1 . 10/28/2007
You don't apologize for length! Haha, better too long than too short. I liked it. ]
| Little Pastry chapter 1 . 10/25/2007
Aw, the end was nice.
| Iaveina chapter 1 . 10/24/2007
This is an absolutely amazing story.
I love how it's written, all the characters reactions are, at least to me, believable and it's just amazing!