|Reviews for One Piece the Abridged Series|
| GreenCAT the second chapter 5 . 8/6/2012
i hate the meow mix commercial too puns were bound to come,zoro.i still wonder how luffy survived a blade to the brain.
alphabetsno birth eats books.
| GreenCAT the second chapter 4 . 8/6/2012
SNORE...luffyluffyluffyluffy...oh! !i love this chapter!
i could not help but to lol at the scam of the global warm-DUFHVBFEYCXSZDJSFNHSJDCDNXBF SNCJFHDSNFDJFSDNFDJFDSFNCJSD JFJS*dies*
| GreenCAT the second chapter 3 . 8/4/2012
| GreenCAT the second chapter 2 . 8/4/2012
| GreenCAT the second chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
| Rode Vlinder chapter 9 . 6/17/2009
I can't stop laughing.
| RubberMan chapter 9 . 10/21/2008
But can you write the next Chapter sooner? I want to see what happens next
| Wasabikitty10 chapter 9 . 10/15/2008
It wasn't that funny at first, but then I got to the line about the books in mytery dishes...
From then on, I was screaming with laughing. Now my brother thinks his older sister is a lunatic. Oh, well.
| Mihoriru chapter 2 . 10/13/2008
lol... so funny. :D
| deactivatedsinceforever chapter 2 . 10/9/2008
"Besides the fact that Zoro was all dressed mostly in black with a green haramaki sash around his waist, a black bandana on his head and a triple ear-piercing on his left ear that would make any anime fan girl fall for him, this wasn't the unusual sight."
XD lol i literally couldn't stop laughing at this part i laugh because its true i love this abridged series
| forbiddenfantasy chapter 9 . 9/24/2008
OMG! I can't stop laughing over the song! ACK! yuck! i think i just swallowed a bug, cuz my mouth was wide open. oh well. This is to damn hilarious!
| insertrandom chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
Ahahaha, I really laughed HARD when I got to Shanks' and Luffy's conversation, and the Gold Roger's scenes. Heck, EVERYTHING was hilarious! Good work! XD
| ScriptedScarlet chapter 8 . 8/28/2008
You've been getting a little too random here and there, with the vending machine and the boogie man, (is that just me, or is it a Nightmare Before Christmas Reference?) but this continues to be one of the funniest fanfics I've read. The parts with the photoshopping the cape and the 4KR were excellent though. I'm kind of wondering how you're going to make the next chapter a musical though...
| Nimak chapter 8 . 8/27/2008
Tis random, me like random. KEEP IT UP!
(tis a good review)
fancy pants *snicker*
| BlueRyuu chapter 8 . 8/27/2008
yknow, im so glad that you decided to make an abridged for one piece XD youre right, all youtube abridged one-piecey things suck! :O but it is sorta funny ill keep an eye out for it
ps. its also hard to remember that the story is being narrated by Seto Kaiba :O you should point out at completely irrelevant, pointless, and annoying times that he is still there sorta lol