Old story I know. Just wanted to comment and say it was good up until Allie was killed. But then it was just insane, like how stupid and uncaring are we supposed to believe the Cullens are? Like, lets leave this child with a dude who has literally said he will hurt her, and thought about killing her(which Edward knew) and not have anyone there to look after this girl that the whole family supposedly loves... Just too unrealistic.

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Oh my god I just cried

Oh my god no! Allie!
I can't believe Mike just killed Allie. No. Please don't.

You got me crying.. I never cry.. stop that.

Now why not do that before.. he killed his baby girl?

Did you have to kill that baby? I would hate to write this chapter...sad

In my opinion Charlie's disinterest in being a parent or his inability led Bella to be so dependent on the Cullen family. Her own let her down over and over. So he still does not pick up on what has happened. with him on the floor Bella should call him to come over and see what has happened. File charges restraining orders and file for divorce and as the only parent to Allie. Dissolve his rights to her completely. Then one night on his way home from work he gets drunk and wrecks his car. Walla.. no more Mike.

I can not wait for him to assault Mike. In a huge way

I just can't help but keep picturing allie when Bella and Edward found her and I keep crying because of it

I don't know what to say. I'm going to continue reading but this... This chapter... I cried the whole way through and I- I just... It wasn't how I would I have liked it to end up

Screw this story, idc it’s from 2008 killing Allie was a horrible stupid decision

This could have been a good story but you killed Allie for no reason

Where is Allie?